for No Tendo4/7/2010 c19 Waspy
It’d love to see Makoto or Hotaru try to upgrade Bonaparte like Minako did with her airplane. With its A.I. and self-diagnostic sensor package boosted, Bonaparte would be able to send data on its transformation back to the BOLO and K-9 units who are better equipped to analyze the information than SG-1 and Area51 is currently capable of.
If given sufficient time to process Bonaparte’s data, BOLO might be able to modify Minako’s A-10 aerospace bomber and turn it into a variable fighter jet/robot like in Macross or Robotech, much to Maybourne’s delight.
However, before the Sailor Senshi try to upgrade Bonaparte, they ought to install a medscanner inside the cockpit if it doesn’t have one already so it can be monitor the symbiotic connection between the pilot and itself to establish a baseline for future research.
It’d love to see Makoto or Hotaru try to upgrade Bonaparte like Minako did with her airplane. With its A.I. and self-diagnostic sensor package boosted, Bonaparte would be able to send data on its transformation back to the BOLO and K-9 units who are better equipped to analyze the information than SG-1 and Area51 is currently capable of.
If given sufficient time to process Bonaparte’s data, BOLO might be able to modify Minako’s A-10 aerospace bomber and turn it into a variable fighter jet/robot like in Macross or Robotech, much to Maybourne’s delight.
However, before the Sailor Senshi try to upgrade Bonaparte, they ought to install a medscanner inside the cockpit if it doesn’t have one already so it can be monitor the symbiotic connection between the pilot and itself to establish a baseline for future research.
4/7/2010 c18 Waspy
It’d love to see Makoto or Hotaru try to upgrade Bonaparte like Minako did with her airplane. With its A.I. and self-diagnostic sensor package boosted, Bonaparte would be able to send data on its transformation back to the BOLO and K-9 units who are better equipped to analyze the information than SG-1 and Area51 is currently capable of.
If given sufficient time to process Bonaparte’s data, BOLO might be able to modify Minako’s A-10 aerospace bomber and turn it into a variable fighter jet/robot like in Macross or Robotech, much to Maybourne’s delight.
However, before the Sailor Senshi try to upgrade Bonaparte, they ought to install a medscanner inside the cockpit if it doesn’t have one already so it can be monitor the symbiotic connection between the pilot and itself to establish a baseline for future research.
It’d love to see Makoto or Hotaru try to upgrade Bonaparte like Minako did with her airplane. With its A.I. and self-diagnostic sensor package boosted, Bonaparte would be able to send data on its transformation back to the BOLO and K-9 units who are better equipped to analyze the information than SG-1 and Area51 is currently capable of.
If given sufficient time to process Bonaparte’s data, BOLO might be able to modify Minako’s A-10 aerospace bomber and turn it into a variable fighter jet/robot like in Macross or Robotech, much to Maybourne’s delight.
However, before the Sailor Senshi try to upgrade Bonaparte, they ought to install a medscanner inside the cockpit if it doesn’t have one already so it can be monitor the symbiotic connection between the pilot and itself to establish a baseline for future research.
4/7/2010 c20 
1Lord Sia
Loved this story on Addventure, love it on FFN as well. Keep it coming, and do feel free to add more new stuff. If you don't mind, I'd like to borrow an episode or two and post 'em on Maximum-Addventure. For some reason, I can't manage to post on Addventure (I've been trying for two years, with every browser as well as both Mac (both Tiger and Leopard) and Windows (20 and Vista); it's still a no-go for some reason... You wouldn't know why?) - otherwise I'd have added to it a long time ago.
I do so look forward to more.
1Lord SiaLoved this story on Addventure, love it on FFN as well. Keep it coming, and do feel free to add more new stuff. If you don't mind, I'd like to borrow an episode or two and post 'em on Maximum-Addventure. For some reason, I can't manage to post on Addventure (I've been trying for two years, with every browser as well as both Mac (both Tiger and Leopard) and Windows (20 and Vista); it's still a no-go for some reason... You wouldn't know why?) - otherwise I'd have added to it a long time ago.
I do so look forward to more.
4/7/2010 c19 1Batman4u
Outstanding! Normally, I don't like Sailor Moon, but your crossover is so well done, eliminating silly inconsistances to make it feel more realistic yet still maintaining elements of fantasy, sci-fi, and humor.
BRAVO!
Outstanding! Normally, I don't like Sailor Moon, but your crossover is so well done, eliminating silly inconsistances to make it feel more realistic yet still maintaining elements of fantasy, sci-fi, and humor.
BRAVO!
4/7/2010 c20 DJinnai
Have been following this since the beginning, and out of all of the cameos so far, I have to say, the Prinny Launcher takes the cake. As long as the quality of writing (and humor) keeps up, this one's going to stay near the top of the stack!
Have been following this since the beginning, and out of all of the cameos so far, I have to say, the Prinny Launcher takes the cake. As long as the quality of writing (and humor) keeps up, this one's going to stay near the top of the stack!
4/7/2010 c20 Poly
Great fic so far. Love the fast updates as well.
I was thinking about the senshi transformation and where it could fit on a more technical level. If the transformation is a designed system it could be a fast and complex setup of machinery and other systems in a pocket dimension or different subspace layer. The girls themselves are just the interface. It’s why Carter couldn’t work out how their powers work. You can’t figure out how a computer works with just the screen and a mouse available. You need the actual computer to get anywhere.
Great fic so far. Love the fast updates as well.
I was thinking about the senshi transformation and where it could fit on a more technical level. If the transformation is a designed system it could be a fast and complex setup of machinery and other systems in a pocket dimension or different subspace layer. The girls themselves are just the interface. It’s why Carter couldn’t work out how their powers work. You can’t figure out how a computer works with just the screen and a mouse available. You need the actual computer to get anywhere.
4/7/2010 c20 KillerWombat
I've been missing Ranma changing into a girl at wrong times, although the following is nice I still would like to see Ranma in the ame position.
"How is this the best idea that you could come up with?" the colonel snarled, leaping to her feet so fast that her breasts bounced.
Also another point; are we going to have any interaction with the Amazons from Ranma 1/2? They bring some interesting martial art skills & their marriage laws could have an interesting hinderance on someone like Sosuke or Jack O'Neil.
Anyway, I look forward to the next chapters.
I've been missing Ranma changing into a girl at wrong times, although the following is nice I still would like to see Ranma in the ame position.
"How is this the best idea that you could come up with?" the colonel snarled, leaping to her feet so fast that her breasts bounced.
Also another point; are we going to have any interaction with the Amazons from Ranma 1/2? They bring some interesting martial art skills & their marriage laws could have an interesting hinderance on someone like Sosuke or Jack O'Neil.
Anyway, I look forward to the next chapters.
4/7/2010 c11 2Naosj
Everything is still funny and interesting, but the story is beginning to lacks a central focus. Neither the plot or a protagonist is really driving the story anymore, which makes me personally meander from scenario to scenario without an anchor to refer back to. The first few chapters only encompassed the journey of Ranma, Hotaru, Hotaru's father, and to a lesser degree the SG-1 team. This nicely focused on Ranma's adventures with Hotaru's role as a love interest and plot changer. However, with the ever increasing number of characters, I can't even keep track when I'm only reading, so I can't imagine how difficult it must be for you to write all this with a coherent frame of mind.
2NaosjEverything is still funny and interesting, but the story is beginning to lacks a central focus. Neither the plot or a protagonist is really driving the story anymore, which makes me personally meander from scenario to scenario without an anchor to refer back to. The first few chapters only encompassed the journey of Ranma, Hotaru, Hotaru's father, and to a lesser degree the SG-1 team. This nicely focused on Ranma's adventures with Hotaru's role as a love interest and plot changer. However, with the ever increasing number of characters, I can't even keep track when I'm only reading, so I can't imagine how difficult it must be for you to write all this with a coherent frame of mind.
4/6/2010 c20 t-dugong
Jolly good chapter. Is there a chance of seeing Guyvers in this fic? I imagine a bio-tech exo-armor would be a hit with the SGC and more importantly, the 'old men' at Washington.
Jolly good chapter. Is there a chance of seeing Guyvers in this fic? I imagine a bio-tech exo-armor would be a hit with the SGC and more importantly, the 'old men' at Washington.
4/6/2010 c19 Grinnerz
Great story, though it really seems to be more a Sailor Moon/ Stargate cross than a Ranma/SM.
Something Luna said: "The Sailor Senshi operate with the best interests of the Silver Millenium at heart. They should be taking orders from YOU, not making so-called suggestions." Is she ever going to realize that the Silver Millenium fell however long ago and thus the people of Earth actually owe the Senshi no loyalty now, if they ever did?
Great story, though it really seems to be more a Sailor Moon/ Stargate cross than a Ranma/SM.
Something Luna said: "The Sailor Senshi operate with the best interests of the Silver Millenium at heart. They should be taking orders from YOU, not making so-called suggestions." Is she ever going to realize that the Silver Millenium fell however long ago and thus the people of Earth actually owe the Senshi no loyalty now, if they ever did?
4/6/2010 c9 Naosj
Too much is going on. I'm losing track of when and where what begins, in addition to forgetting about the status of past characters.
Too much is going on. I'm losing track of when and where what begins, in addition to forgetting about the status of past characters.