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3/28/2010 c1 1The Foolhard Fool
Hey, great story... One-shot... It was a one-shot right? Hehe, well, it was good!
3/28/2010 c1 611Ghostwriter
You're sellin' yourself short here, dude. This totally rocked. Fit Jack perfectly. Catch ya on the flip side.
3/28/2010 c1 37Maxiekat
Really good ... beginning? Is this a beginning? It didn't say complete, so I hope it is something you are planning on continuing (and that Jack lives, lol). You did a good job of capturing Jack's voice and the confusion he must have been going through when he got shot - it had a nice urgency to it.
3/28/2010 c1 53Swing Girl At Heart
Good God, you got talent, girl!

I love, love, love the blunt, street-attitude you used in this - fit perfectly, and enhanced the events and emotions between them tenfold. Kudos!

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