
4/12/2013 c16 AwaitingTheInevitable
omg i loved it! And how she said no, so it reassured she wasnt the rebound! Awesome job!
omg i loved it! And how she said no, so it reassured she wasnt the rebound! Awesome job!
10/8/2012 c1 Catherin
I was crushed when my lover of three years left to be with another woman. I cried and sobbed every day, until it got so bad that I reached out to the Internet for help. I threw away so much money - all for nothing - until I hit on the real thing. And that is you, Prophet Aluta. You were different from all the rest - you are the diamond in the rough. Thank you from the depths of my soul! I am extremely happy now. I hope God blesses you as much as He has blessed me. email him on
I was crushed when my lover of three years left to be with another woman. I cried and sobbed every day, until it got so bad that I reached out to the Internet for help. I threw away so much money - all for nothing - until I hit on the real thing. And that is you, Prophet Aluta. You were different from all the rest - you are the diamond in the rough. Thank you from the depths of my soul! I am extremely happy now. I hope God blesses you as much as He has blessed me. email him on
10/4/2012 c16 Guest
Fuckin amazing...i wish I were sonny ...great n amzing writin skills...kept me glued frm de beginnin to the end...thanks gudness I got to read t ol at once...
Fuckin amazing...i wish I were sonny ...great n amzing writin skills...kept me glued frm de beginnin to the end...thanks gudness I got to read t ol at once...
9/22/2012 c16
40iWant9Lives2Live
Ok I know it's been almost two years since you finished this but I feel that the ending was kind of rushed and I absolutely loved the story though… one of my favorites… but I really wished you posted an epilogue or a sequel to show their relationship more ;) LOVED IT XD

Ok I know it's been almost two years since you finished this but I feel that the ending was kind of rushed and I absolutely loved the story though… one of my favorites… but I really wished you posted an epilogue or a sequel to show their relationship more ;) LOVED IT XD
12/29/2011 c16
2Katniss Everdeens
You deserve the reviews! This is the best SWAC story I've read in forever!
I also think that the ending was very sweet :)

You deserve the reviews! This is the best SWAC story I've read in forever!
I also think that the ending was very sweet :)
12/22/2011 c16
7cabotlove
I did enjoy it. Good job. I'm sorry for whatever you are going through, and if you do need to talk, or just someone to listen, send me a message.
~cabotlove
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I did enjoy it. Good job. I'm sorry for whatever you are going through, and if you do need to talk, or just someone to listen, send me a message.
~cabotlove
Sent from my iPod touch via Pocket Fiction
8/1/2011 c16 aTearFallsDownMyFace4 connor
life is no story no happy ending
life is so in death you have memories
so your not too bored
wen your surroundes by darkness
even if the memories are sad
or jelous
cos in noway would this come true
but i cant say i dont wish it everyday
its 00:34 in the morning and i read this with tears in my eyes all the way through wishing to god it was real
but wishes dont come true
do they?
no...no they dont
bt great writing seriously u should be proud i wasnt joking wen i said i was cryn and depressed but i allso smiled so youve done wat SOOO manny have failed to do :) that make me smile-i never said it hadnt been done
thankyou really :)
life is no story no happy ending
life is so in death you have memories
so your not too bored
wen your surroundes by darkness
even if the memories are sad
or jelous
cos in noway would this come true
but i cant say i dont wish it everyday
its 00:34 in the morning and i read this with tears in my eyes all the way through wishing to god it was real
but wishes dont come true
do they?
no...no they dont
bt great writing seriously u should be proud i wasnt joking wen i said i was cryn and depressed but i allso smiled so youve done wat SOOO manny have failed to do :) that make me smile-i never said it hadnt been done
thankyou really :)
8/1/2011 c9 connor luvn purple ninja
seriously im depressed about al this anyway but ur a fuuucckkiinnggg great writer so i cant not read it ARGGHHRGGHH i h-h-have issuses with your behaveior(c didnt sayhate)
seriously im depressed about al this anyway but ur a fuuucckkiinnggg great writer so i cant not read it ARGGHHRGGHH i h-h-have issuses with your behaveior(c didnt sayhate)
8/1/2011 c7 NinjasCanCryThisNinjaLvsConnor
now i seriously strongly dislike you im not a hater its like wen used dis it was like imagining me+connor WE ALMOST KISSED well in my head U RUINED IT :( *sigh*
now i seriously strongly dislike you im not a hater its like wen used dis it was like imagining me+connor WE ALMOST KISSED well in my head U RUINED IT :( *sigh*
8/1/2011 c1 NinjasCanCryThisNinjaLvsConnor
im acctually crying cos this is like my life no joke well hes connor and his girlfriend is rebecca and me and connor are like perfect im like high wen he smiles and ive cried on his sholder more than once its like he sees me as a girl best friend but allso one of the guys-and im head over heels for him he tells me everything he feels and wen hes sad he can cry-and now im venting instead of reading*but seriously there are tears on my face:(
im acctually crying cos this is like my life no joke well hes connor and his girlfriend is rebecca and me and connor are like perfect im like high wen he smiles and ive cried on his sholder more than once its like he sees me as a girl best friend but allso one of the guys-and im head over heels for him he tells me everything he feels and wen hes sad he can cry-and now im venting instead of reading*but seriously there are tears on my face:(
6/10/2011 c7
1I-AM-SNOWII
1. HELL YEAH
2. that was sweet
3. a piece of cardboard
4. the chapter was awsome

1. HELL YEAH
2. that was sweet
3. a piece of cardboard
4. the chapter was awsome
5/19/2011 c16 ChocoChippieCookie
I absolutely LOVE this story! And i like the fact, very much, that you keep to you self-set deadlines and actually finish the story. I detest authors who don't. (Heh...i may be one of those in the future I really like your plot line - it's so unique! HEEHEE Have you noticed that "Abbie" always seems to be the breaker-upper? XD Nice writing, write more multi-chappies! PRETTY PLEASEEEE!
I absolutely LOVE this story! And i like the fact, very much, that you keep to you self-set deadlines and actually finish the story. I detest authors who don't. (Heh...i may be one of those in the future I really like your plot line - it's so unique! HEEHEE Have you noticed that "Abbie" always seems to be the breaker-upper? XD Nice writing, write more multi-chappies! PRETTY PLEASEEEE!