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8/9/2012 c6 3WhatYourDamage
UPDATE! AND HAVE THE LUCIANS TORTURE THIS IDIOTIC GOODY TWO SHOES!
5/1/2011 c1 great
hey don't worry about the "what r u like 5" reviews I hear that those people are senseless flamers. this is great writing! you do her really well. :)
1/27/2011 c6 Superstar 21
This story nedds Her thoughts on Iany & her & dan!
1/27/2011 c5 Athena 12
2 things 1: Natalie is so self centered & in luv with herself ulike Ian who as Nat would say is in luv with a pesant.

2: Gabriella don't feel bad. Nat hates ever1 besides hersalf & besties.
1/27/2011 c3 superstar 21
Accidents really what r u 5?
1/27/2011 c3 Superstar 21
Why must people make Nat so mean? & what's the detetion 4?
1/27/2011 c2 Superstar 21
Makes seens that the chapters r short I mean She hates it so she would'n't make an entry long. I agree with Natalie SCIENCE. IS. USELESS.! but then agin I gawt a bad grade in science
8/9/2010 c6 1FreakishlyMee
A zit? That is SO like Natalie.

Anyway, its a really good story.

I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
7/2/2010 c2 Guest
If she has a tutor why is she going to school?
5/21/2010 c6 whirl with the wind
You know what? DEAL, NATALIE!

Haha. I know a Natalie. So do you...

Ian was quite amused by that. At least he was until I hit him with my croquet mallet (it's a hobby).

HO HUM! (That's me laughing in an English accent. If I can't talk in one, I can at least laugh in one, right?)

ANYWAYS...

Sweet chapter. I'd like to see some more stuff from anger managment classes...like, you know...dialouge? Not necessarily...

"SER!" LW77 shrieked.

"What-ith?" Ser snapped.

(the play-write of our lives).

Haha.

But yeah. You could do it like PBG does...

LW77: SER!

Ser: What-ith?

Ser sounded really annoyed when she asked "What-ith", probably because LW77 screams her name a lot, and the majority of the time it is about pointless things.

THE DIALOUGE SCRIPT PBG THING OF OUR LIVES.

Ahem.

Anyways.

UPDATE! I KNOW YOU HAVE THAT CHAPTER DONE!

From a slightly insane

~LW77
4/24/2010 c5 amiculum
That was a great chapter. Wow... I haven't updated any of my stories forEVER.
4/21/2010 c5 19Pepsigirl120
OMG! I love this!
4/20/2010 c5 whirl with the wind
Well, first of all- why do you put "for muse and Lw77's the 39 Diaries contest every single time? You don't need to do that...just in the summary.

Making sure you know...

Other than that, I enjoyed this chapter! Natalie could have reacted more violently, but I still enjoyed it. :D Good job.
4/10/2010 c4 6iluvdance622
Well, this is for all the chapters. I just read them. It's pretty good! Sounds like Natalie, if she was going to school in the books :). Just a few things I noticed... Natalie said there was a Gucci sale: the true Natalie would be like, "ugh. Sales are for poor people!" Also, she's really rich, so her parents wouldn't care how much money she spent on sunglasses. And you spelt counselor wrong. This story has potential though! Is it going to take place during the 39 clues, or just at a random time? How old is Natalie when she's writing this? Oh, and you said it was a sunny day in chapter four, but at the top it's Friday, December 5th. So, yeah. This was a long review!
4/10/2010 c4 14iciclegirl235
WOW, haha. This is really Natalie Kabra-ish, so...evil. I especially like the Gabriella thing.
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