for Role Reversal1/22/2022 c32 JB4Ever
You're a talented writer and this story was interesting
but also painful, I really hate the Cullens.
You're a talented writer and this story was interesting
but also painful, I really hate the Cullens.
1/8/2022 c10 JB4EVER
I have to be honest and say, I actually only skim over
Edwards POV, I would do the same for all the Cullens.
Yeah, I am not fond of them.
Jacob, Bella and the pack, I would read every word of their POV.
I love protectors not predators.
Your story is very well written.
I have to be honest and say, I actually only skim over
Edwards POV, I would do the same for all the Cullens.
Yeah, I am not fond of them.
Jacob, Bella and the pack, I would read every word of their POV.
I love protectors not predators.
Your story is very well written.
10/23/2020 c5 bellajake
I loved hearing from Jake,not so much Mr sparkles
I was never a Cullen fan, they are deceitful undead predators,
I loved hearing from Jake,not so much Mr sparkles
I was never a Cullen fan, they are deceitful undead predators,
7/26/2020 c5 guest
i love jacib povs. especially ones where he is carefree and just enjoying a crush on Bella... hes just SOO CUTE! love this story, keep up the amazing work!
i love jacib povs. especially ones where he is carefree and just enjoying a crush on Bella... hes just SOO CUTE! love this story, keep up the amazing work!
3/26/2019 c32 Coolio
I can’t even tell that English isn’t your first language! This is way better than anything I could have written and I was born and raised in the USA! You are simply amazing. Never give up writing. I can’t to read more
I can’t even tell that English isn’t your first language! This is way better than anything I could have written and I was born and raised in the USA! You are simply amazing. Never give up writing. I can’t to read more
11/19/2015 c1 
28Malfoy Mouth James- MMJ
I really like it! Dont let the language barrier stress you out, I thought it was really good.
28Malfoy Mouth James- MMJI really like it! Dont let the language barrier stress you out, I thought it was really good.
8/26/2012 c32 6jayley
really, bella is quite nosy about the cullen's considering she likes jacob instead of edward in your story! i'd almost feel bad for her bothering them about it, except for the fact that it's pretty obvious they could've just left her alone and everything would've been fine, so it's really all their fault. interesting to see rachel, has me wondering if she'll be running into paul or not...and wow if english is your second language i guess it seems like my third if we're comparing writing skills!
6jayleyreally, bella is quite nosy about the cullen's considering she likes jacob instead of edward in your story! i'd almost feel bad for her bothering them about it, except for the fact that it's pretty obvious they could've just left her alone and everything would've been fine, so it's really all their fault. interesting to see rachel, has me wondering if she'll be running into paul or not...and wow if english is your second language i guess it seems like my third if we're comparing writing skills!
8/2/2012 c30 mrslisablack
Quil and Sam are very bold to be talking about the wolves and vampire's secrets like that.
Very sweet kiss and nice conversation leading up to it.
Quil and Sam are very bold to be talking about the wolves and vampire's secrets like that.
Very sweet kiss and nice conversation leading up to it.
8/2/2012 c29 mrslisablack
Cute pajama party. Interesting concept - fun with girlfriends. Another thing that was lacking in the books.
Cute pajama party. Interesting concept - fun with girlfriends. Another thing that was lacking in the books.
8/2/2012 c28 mrslisablack
Love that Bella thinks of Edward as a father figure - telling her what to do. Awesome. He is 80 years older than her! She never figured that out.
Love that Bella thinks of Edward as a father figure - telling her what to do. Awesome. He is 80 years older than her! She never figured that out.
8/2/2012 c13 Guest
Interesting take on it. Great story.
Interesting take on it. Great story.