
11/24/2013 c1 thehazeleyedloser
this was fucking adorable. and i don’t think you’ll mind i am leaving a review.
— deanna
this was fucking adorable. and i don’t think you’ll mind i am leaving a review.
— deanna
4/19/2010 c1
6FollowThisRhythm
Okay, okay-
Confession one: I skipped down to the first fic of yours in the PB archive.
Confession two: I am /so/ glad that I did because this is so unbelievably sweet!
To be honest, I usually try to stay away from such short fics as this (I know, I know, horrible) but it's just most of the ones I've read haven't had much substance to them, nothing to really hit me or move me, y'know what I mean? But this- gosh, this is so adorable and I /love/ the whole "I didn't think you'd mind"! Both characters seem so innocent and hesitant and young -as it usually is for first love- and I find it simply amazing that I was able to feel and sense so much from your characters within 150 words!
Simply fantastic job Bree! I loved this fic :)
-Amy

Okay, okay-
Confession one: I skipped down to the first fic of yours in the PB archive.
Confession two: I am /so/ glad that I did because this is so unbelievably sweet!
To be honest, I usually try to stay away from such short fics as this (I know, I know, horrible) but it's just most of the ones I've read haven't had much substance to them, nothing to really hit me or move me, y'know what I mean? But this- gosh, this is so adorable and I /love/ the whole "I didn't think you'd mind"! Both characters seem so innocent and hesitant and young -as it usually is for first love- and I find it simply amazing that I was able to feel and sense so much from your characters within 150 words!
Simply fantastic job Bree! I loved this fic :)
-Amy
4/10/2010 c1
70iMissHP
SO sweet and cute. The shortness of the fic really fits what you wanted to show, I think. I liked it.

SO sweet and cute. The shortness of the fic really fits what you wanted to show, I think. I liked it.
4/8/2010 c1
1fauves
This is so cute and simple. I really love it and I love how you can just write about any pairing, it's amazing
Pinky x 3

This is so cute and simple. I really love it and I love how you can just write about any pairing, it's amazing
Pinky x 3
4/5/2010 c1
72Schermionie
Very sweet. I liked how you showed three scenes from different stages of their relationship, all with that line.

Very sweet. I liked how you showed three scenes from different stages of their relationship, all with that line.
4/3/2010 c1
45verity candor
Aw, sweet. Liked how she initiated the first encounters, and he initiated the last one.

Aw, sweet. Liked how she initiated the first encounters, and he initiated the last one.
4/2/2010 c1
23RavenEcho
I agree that it wouldn't be your best work. I like the slightly longer pieces you usually do. Still alright though! (Sorry for the lackluster review, but I'm part of the review revolution!)

I agree that it wouldn't be your best work. I like the slightly longer pieces you usually do. Still alright though! (Sorry for the lackluster review, but I'm part of the review revolution!)
3/31/2010 c1
2whenitwasmagic
I really liked that! I feel like I haven't read anything by you in a-g-e-s, so this is a welcome fic. :D Loved the simplicity and the repetition.

I really liked that! I feel like I haven't read anything by you in a-g-e-s, so this is a welcome fic. :D Loved the simplicity and the repetition.
3/31/2010 c1 Guest
Aw, so cute.
Aw, so cute.