for Unravel Me12/19/2016 c1 
13archy12
Terrific writing. I could feel Edward's pain at being cheated upon, but also at losing the opportunity of being a father. And sleeping with Victoria made it only worse.
13archy12Terrific writing. I could feel Edward's pain at being cheated upon, but also at losing the opportunity of being a father. And sleeping with Victoria made it only worse.
5/3/2016 c1 jk
so gross...tanwhore and firecrotch? ewww
so gross...tanwhore and firecrotch? ewww
6/2/2015 c1 jk
wow reading about Tanya and him it just feels soooooo wrong
wow reading about Tanya and him it just feels soooooo wrong
10/6/2014 c1 20Maplestyle
Was it wrong that I was kind of hoping that Edward would kill James and Tanya?
20MaplestyleWas it wrong that I was kind of hoping that Edward would kill James and Tanya?
9/3/2014 c1 Guest
LOL
His one night stand with Victoria will prolly result in her becoming pregnant, or she's already pregnant to James but didn't realize it, Edward will find out after he has only begun to move on and met someone else who is now deeply in love with, possibly Bella? Who knows LOL, anyways, he will see Victoria pregnant, or with a baby and then freak the fuck out thinking that his new love will leave him if he has a child with someone else...One huge clusterfuck of drama! Oh snap, I think someone done wrote about something like this already lmao.
Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed this immensely 3
LOL
His one night stand with Victoria will prolly result in her becoming pregnant, or she's already pregnant to James but didn't realize it, Edward will find out after he has only begun to move on and met someone else who is now deeply in love with, possibly Bella? Who knows LOL, anyways, he will see Victoria pregnant, or with a baby and then freak the fuck out thinking that his new love will leave him if he has a child with someone else...One huge clusterfuck of drama! Oh snap, I think someone done wrote about something like this already lmao.
Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed this immensely 3
5/29/2013 c1 Nannyjojo
It wasn't until he had left the house and was at the bar asking how could he ever trust again, that I realised that this is the story of Tanya and Edward before Elusively Yours.
Loved getting a full insight into what happened.
It wasn't until he had left the house and was at the bar asking how could he ever trust again, that I realised that this is the story of Tanya and Edward before Elusively Yours.
Loved getting a full insight into what happened.
12/1/2012 c1 kstar0330
Wow that was really good. Poor guy I guess this will be the downfall of what started his assuming bad behavior in EY. :(
Wow that was really good. Poor guy I guess this will be the downfall of what started his assuming bad behavior in EY. :(
4/15/2012 c1 Quittingcoldturkey
There is no way a lying, cheating, unfaithful woman is the best thing Edward ever had. If he thinks that, his standards are incredibly low.
I'm on to read the partner of this story, hoping better things are in store for him.
There is no way a lying, cheating, unfaithful woman is the best thing Edward ever had. If he thinks that, his standards are incredibly low.
I'm on to read the partner of this story, hoping better things are in store for him.