for Lost5/1/2010 c1 
126Mor.2
Wow, this is so full of emotions! You do such a great job showing how Hermione is feeling. There is so much detail that I feel like I'm right there, beside Hermione and watching her go through everything. Great job!
-Morghen
126Mor.2Wow, this is so full of emotions! You do such a great job showing how Hermione is feeling. There is so much detail that I feel like I'm right there, beside Hermione and watching her go through everything. Great job!
-Morghen
4/6/2010 c1 xxMOONandPAWxx
heyy
as usuall qith your stories I loved this, ~I think the emotion was really good, it really made the being lost and needing to run understandable once you seen that she was clearly distraught.
I think you should add more to this :)
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as usuall qith your stories I loved this, ~I think the emotion was really good, it really made the being lost and needing to run understandable once you seen that she was clearly distraught.
I think you should add more to this :)
xx
4/5/2010 c1 4PropertyoftheHBP
Very nice...you certainly portrayed Hermione's emotions very well and it was a good read! :)
4PropertyoftheHBPVery nice...you certainly portrayed Hermione's emotions very well and it was a good read! :)
4/5/2010 c1 Critic007
Original, I liked it.
Maybe you could've made it a bit longer just to delve a little deeper into her emotions.
I think you should consider a sequel, just to show what happens next with Draco and all.
Oh, and, about this line: 'And a part of me saw a glimpse of Fred in his twin brother.'...maybe that's because they're identical twins...?
I don't know, just taking a wild guess here. ;]
- Critic007
Original, I liked it.
Maybe you could've made it a bit longer just to delve a little deeper into her emotions.
I think you should consider a sequel, just to show what happens next with Draco and all.
Oh, and, about this line: 'And a part of me saw a glimpse of Fred in his twin brother.'...maybe that's because they're identical twins...?
I don't know, just taking a wild guess here. ;]
- Critic007
4/1/2010 c1 5Neko-fire demon tempest
you could have made this longer to give us a better feel for hermiones healing heart but it was still very nicely writen :p
5Neko-fire demon tempestyou could have made this longer to give us a better feel for hermiones healing heart but it was still very nicely writen :p