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4/7/2010 c2 8CullenObsession114
loved it!
4/7/2010 c2 sharon89
Bella's situation gave me really an uneasy feeling and it hurt to see her like that... You cant believe how glad and relieved I am that Bella realized that she doesnt love Jay anymore and she only wants out!

When she talked with Alice, oh boy, it brought a huge smile on my face. She was laughing and joking and seemed so happy. Im so looking forward to see Bella and Alice together! =)

Hmm, I have to disagree with Edward I find it quite good that his first flight was cancelled. :) Cant wait to see Edward's reaction when he sees Bella again. *g*

Aw, what we saw of Bella through Edward's eyes makes me so so happy. I hope that this trip and Alice will help her to bring back more of the old Bella. :)

Such an awesome chapter, I love it and enjoyed reading it! Looking forward to more! =)
4/7/2010 c2 bellamarie4
oh I am just so loving this story! Your stories are great!

Can't wait to get more into this one-can't wait for them to officially meet!
4/7/2010 c2 rodeomom95
Loving this story already! I *try* not to read WIP but since it's you I couldn't stay away.
4/7/2010 c2 flecour
Jay sounds like a loser. Excellent Chapter! =)
4/7/2010 c2 treasurecoast
Great chapter – even if BPOV is so sad. After all the early promise, it’s depressing that she’s a tech writer. And not only is Jay a moper, even worse, he’s a self-centered, needy, inconsiderate SOB who’s sucked all the life out of her. He needs to get kicked to the curb …but I have the feeling that Bella is too soft hearted to do so while he’s down. It’s sad that she doesn’t even know how she ended up in this life, with this man … but at least she’s awakened and acknowledged his effect on her life and that she no longer loves him. And it’s great she no longer has ties to Seattle. You did a great job of conjuring up a man who, while not a monster, is someone of whom no woman should want to become his enabler.

I liked B&E’s first “meeting” and their connection. Though I wonder if her interpretation of his reaction as disgust when he’s actually knocked off his feet is going to be a theme of their interactions going forward. At least his last gesture should be impossible to misinterpret. Can’t wait to see what happens when they see each other at the St. R!
4/7/2010 c2 we live for love
Can't wait for them to officially meet!
4/7/2010 c2 LBJoy
YAY! They've made a connection... Looking fwd to B&E discovering they are in the same wedding.

B needs to break-up with Jay asap 'cause their relationship is not healthy.

Thanks for another great update.
4/7/2010 c2 12ChocolateLover82
Wow, Bella is miserable, I get that she feels she owes something to James, but that is no reason to stay with him...he's an ass.

I just hope she gets back to being that amazing and creative Bella you showed a little of at the beginning of this story. She should just move to Chicago and start fresh :D

Can't wait to see what will happen when they realize who they are when they see each other again.
4/7/2010 c2 TwilightAddict37
I'm so glad you decided to post this story. I'm loving it. I love your writing and am looking forward to the rest of this story.
4/7/2010 c2 2Lydia S. Hall
Oh the "reveal" here will be priceless- I just know it!

Great job!

(More please)

Lydia
4/7/2010 c2 ECis4Me
Love that Bella had her epiphany before she left.

Also love their connection in the airport!

Can't wait for the next chapter. ;)
4/7/2010 c2 20Maplestyle
Poor Bella, feeling trapped. I know what that's like that's for sure!

I really hope that she and Edward have as great connection when they actually meet! Can't wait for the next update!
4/7/2010 c2 polyphany
Love it so far!
4/7/2010 c2 chani1013
absolutely adorable! Can't wait for the next chapter
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