4/7/2010 c2 nksnksjndf
I breathed a sigh of relieve when it said that Alice was the one having the wedding. I swore it was going to be Bella's.

But anyway, so far I'm in love with this and I hope that you continue with it. This is amazing !

4/7/2010 c2 maggiejoma
this wedding is going to be such fun...;0

4/7/2010 c2 sharon89
Bella's situation gave me really an uneasy feeling and it hurt to see her like that... You cant believe how glad and relieved I am that Bella realized that she doesnt love Jay anymore and she only wants out!

When she talked with Alice, oh boy, it brought a huge smile on my face. She was laughing and joking and seemed so happy. Im so looking forward to see Bella and Alice together! =)

Hmm, I have to disagree with Edward I find it quite good that his first flight was cancelled. :) Cant wait to see Edward's reaction when he sees Bella again. *g*

Aw, what we saw of Bella through Edward's eyes makes me so so happy. I hope that this trip and Alice will help her to bring back more of the old Bella. :)

Such an awesome chapter, I love it and enjoyed reading it! Looking forward to more! =)

4/7/2010 c2 rodeomom95
Loving this story already! I *try* not to read WIP but since it's you I couldn't stay away.

4/7/2010 c2 treasurecoast
Great chapter – even if BPOV is so sad. After all the early promise, it’s depressing that she’s a tech writer. And not only is Jay a moper, even worse, he’s a self-centered, needy, inconsiderate SOB who’s sucked all the life out of her. He needs to get kicked to the curb …but I have the feeling that Bella is too soft hearted to do so while he’s down. It’s sad that she doesn’t even know how she ended up in this life, with this man … but at least she’s awakened and acknowledged his effect on her life and that she no longer loves him. And it’s great she no longer has ties to Seattle. You did a great job of conjuring up a man who, while not a monster, is someone of whom no woman should want to become his enabler.

I liked B&E’s first “meeting” and their connection. Though I wonder if her interpretation of his reaction as disgust when he’s actually knocked off his feet is going to be a theme of their interactions going forward. At least his last gesture should be impossible to misinterpret. Can’t wait to see what happens when they see each other at the St. R!

4/7/2010 c2 LBJoy
YAY! They've made a connection... Looking fwd to B&E discovering they are in the same wedding.

B needs to break-up with Jay asap 'cause their relationship is not healthy.

Thanks for another great update.

4/7/2010 c2 TwilightAddict37
I'm so glad you decided to post this story. I'm loving it. I love your writing and am looking forward to the rest of this story.