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4/2/2010 c1 my1edward
Your first chapter is very intriguing-I like the premise so far. I wonder what Bella's relationship with Jay is-girlfriend? I hope not wife. I also wonder why she has a dead-end job-I don't feel her drive and energy in the present day which was so apparent in 2005, so life hasn't been so good to her, I guess. And Edward-he clearly needs to meet Bella stat. I assume he's got to have some link to her. Did he write the story she liked so much? Or was he the frat boy in the latte line so long ago? Or will they meet for the first time at the wedding?, perhaps? Looking forward to more.
4/2/2010 c1 ppeaches
This sounds rather promising.

I'm looking forward to getting to know these characters and seeing where you take them.
4/2/2010 c1 dizziestdaydream
Well done! I really like it and can't wait to read more.
4/2/2010 c1 kwvillen
You write it, I'll read it.
4/2/2010 c1 jennchris821
Great story, can't wait to see where it goes.
4/2/2010 c1 fanofbones
This sounds like a fantastic story. I'm really looking forward to it.

I'm curious why Bella said she owed Jay...hm...

You can never go wrong with Doctor Edward ;)

See ya next chappie...

fab
4/2/2010 c1 blueXsun
i like it so far. can't wait to see where it goes. :)

♥ ♥
4/2/2010 c1 1liztucker17
good story, looking forward to the next chapter :) xx
4/2/2010 c1 1CJ1325
I like it nice start. can't wait to see how it plays out.
4/2/2010 c1 klel323
Looking forward to see where you take this!
4/2/2010 c1 TwilightAddict37
You've got my attention.
4/2/2010 c1 CaroBeaH
i am intrigued! can't wait to see what happens.
4/2/2010 c1 legallyblondeff
This story will be great! Anxiously waiting for more.
4/2/2010 c1 LBJoy
Loved it! Looking fwd to reading where it goes.

Thanks for posting.
4/2/2010 c1 ClancyJane
oh i like this so much already... please bring on chapter 2 : )
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