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4/2/2010 c1 1snarkerella
Excited for your new story! Looking forward to figuring everything out and seeing how it all happens! Have a good day : )
4/2/2010 c1 SubieC
Yay! I'm so happy you're writing another story.
4/2/2010 c1 forgotten22
I like the start of this so far. Seems interesting enough :) So the past was in 2005, the present is 2010?

Is this going to stay mostly in the present now? Or will it go back and forth a little bit? (I don't mind, just curious :))

And soo... Alice and Jasper's wedding? or Angela and Ben's? Bella is a bridesmaid? Edward is best man? - And they have never met? interesting. I have a big feeling it was Edward who was the frat boy at the coffee place.. So he has at least seen her before, but she hasn't seen him right?

And Bella and Jay are dating? engaged? just co-workers? Please let it just be co-workers! That nasty slimeball (sorry, not a huge James fan ;P lol) better not be sleeping with her a whole lot. I might gag.. js ;) haha

Well you're doing pretty well so far. I'm looking forward to see what the next chapter will bring us :)
4/2/2010 c1 bairin breac
Nice... Bet Edwward would still look hot after a 30 hour shift though...

And how old's Bella?
4/2/2010 c1 4kaycross1184
Sounds like a promising start. I just hope you can update regularly since you're also working on two other stories. Don't spread yourself too thin. Update soon.
4/2/2010 c1 ToDeleteAccount
Cannot wait to read the rest :)

How did she end up staying with Jay? Just because she's nice?

ttfn

Ardanwen
4/2/2010 c1 8babylopez2008
ooh can't wait for the summary to start.

Are Bella and Jay dating? Lol I just needed it confirmed for me cause I'll be just waiting till the next chapter to find out.

Wow that sucks that there are actual women like that looking for doctors for that reason alone.

Bella is awesome!
4/1/2010 c1 Cecilia Siledubh Mohney
This looks interesting. I'm curious about what happened to Bella between starting a magazine and winding up in a boring job with a boring boyfriend (?).

I always love Dr. Edward :)

'm looking forward to the next chapter!
4/1/2010 c1 8CullenObsession114
loved it!
4/1/2010 c1 2HopeStreet
I loved this first chapter. I'm really looking forward to more of this story!
4/1/2010 c1 TrulyOutrageous
Interesting looking forward to reading more
4/1/2010 c1 Just Sus
O...Is it Bella's wedding?
4/1/2010 c1 Dawnriki
So far, so good! You totally have me interested. Esp as to why Bella feels she "owes" Jay.

Is it Alice and Jasper's wedding? PLEASE tell me that B is not engaged to Jay (although, that would make for an interesting meeting between Bella and Edward...)
4/1/2010 c1 jerseyhalliwell
very nice start :)
4/1/2010 c1 Erikajo
Thgis sounds really good! Can't wait for more...
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