4/2/2010 c1 thatgirljen
I like it! Im wondering if Jay is James or Jasper. He seems like a bit of a douche so I want to go with James, but the hair description sounded like Jasper so who the hell knows. Im getting a feeling that maybe Jay was Edwards roommate, but Bella mentioned nothing of being engaged in her present day pov so again I am left wondering. Great so far, cant wait to read more.

4/2/2010 c1 pamedo
looks interesting. im anticipating hot wedding sex maybe? lol..excited to see whats coming up :)

4/2/2010 c1 my1edward
Your first chapter is very intriguing-I like the premise so far. I wonder what Bella's relationship with Jay is-girlfriend? I hope not wife. I also wonder why she has a dead-end job-I don't feel her drive and energy in the present day which was so apparent in 2005, so life hasn't been so good to her, I guess. And Edward-he clearly needs to meet Bella stat. I assume he's got to have some link to her. Did he write the story she liked so much? Or was he the frat boy in the latte line so long ago? Or will they meet for the first time at the wedding?, perhaps? Looking forward to more.

4/2/2010 c1 dizziestdaydream
Well done! I really like it and can't wait to read more.

4/2/2010 c1 jennchris821
Great story, can't wait to see where it goes.

4/2/2010 c1 blueXsun
i like it so far. can't wait to see where it goes. :)

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4/2/2010 c1 1CJ1325
I like it nice start. can't wait to see how it plays out.

4/2/2010 c1 TwilightAddict37
You've got my attention.