for After the Battle9/30/2015 c1 
2AzureHarume
OMG-O-S-H! PLZ CONTINUE WITH THIS! Also how about when class is over shinichi talk to shiho(haibara) about what happened and Ran comes up and the three of them started talking and then shinichi talk with shiho in private again then he walks home with ran or something like that :D
2AzureHarumeOMG-O-S-H! PLZ CONTINUE WITH THIS! Also how about when class is over shinichi talk to shiho(haibara) about what happened and Ran comes up and the three of them started talking and then shinichi talk with shiho in private again then he walks home with ran or something like that :D
1/22/2014 c1 ZeroReader
Please update
Please update
12/12/2013 c1 Harumi
Esta muy bien, ya se que ha pasado tiempo pero la podrias seguir...plis
Esta muy bien, ya se que ha pasado tiempo pero la podrias seguir...plis
10/11/2012 c1 Guest
Are you dead or stupid?
Such a story, and You Have Not worked on it?
No, really!
Are you dead or stupid?
Such a story, and You Have Not worked on it?
No, really!
10/11/2012 c1 Natalia R
Piece of advice, AK Focus more on the angsty bits, and you've got yourself a winner and you make a nasty habit of leaving stories incomplete for a long period of time!
Piece of advice, AK Focus more on the angsty bits, and you've got yourself a winner and you make a nasty habit of leaving stories incomplete for a long period of time!
9/12/2010 c1 just another pickel
CUTE
love that! please write more !
~pickel=D
CUTE
love that! please write more !
~pickel=D
6/20/2010 c1 calissta
why didin't you continue this story? i was really curious with the story, it's not over yet.. and there's no scene between shinichi and shiho... please make the next chapter...please...
why didin't you continue this story? i was really curious with the story, it's not over yet.. and there's no scene between shinichi and shiho... please make the next chapter...please...
4/15/2010 c1 Jensniffer
This story is really interesting so far. As for the plot details, they can all be ironed out later on, but the idea of writing this was pretty well thought out. I hope you continue writing, if not this story, then others!
This story is really interesting so far. As for the plot details, they can all be ironed out later on, but the idea of writing this was pretty well thought out. I hope you continue writing, if not this story, then others!
4/11/2010 c1 Elia950
Well... i may be a bit biased on this.. as Ran is the Detective Conan Character i hate more.. while i LOVE Shiho and Shinichi together..
So.. personally a little romance would be good..
The reaction of the others while Shiho and Shinichi battle each others, after everything they have passed together, there have to be some sort of 'special link' between them, or someting like comrade that they can't see, but all the others people can °°
Well... i may be a bit biased on this.. as Ran is the Detective Conan Character i hate more.. while i LOVE Shiho and Shinichi together..
So.. personally a little romance would be good..
The reaction of the others while Shiho and Shinichi battle each others, after everything they have passed together, there have to be some sort of 'special link' between them, or someting like comrade that they can't see, but all the others people can °°
4/4/2010 c1 HanaLala
You have to update ASAP ...
You have to update ASAP ...
4/4/2010 c1 39mon-ra
interesting story, a few typos but not bad.
personally i think that the Shinichi and Shiho's interaction should be told from Ran's POV especially during a case.
39mon-rainteresting story, a few typos but not bad.
personally i think that the Shinichi and Shiho's interaction should be told from Ran's POV especially during a case.
4/4/2010 c1 CuteGirl333
I like your story, though it seems to have been typed in a hurry, for you missed some words and added more punctuations than needed. Well the overall plan is exciting, i wish you luck to continue and i'll be waiting for the next chapter!
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p.S : I don't think that you are clueless about an 'end', because the way it is written say that there's a plot behind...
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The story is great by the way.
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I also read Albus & James Potter, and i think it was a great job!
I like your story, though it seems to have been typed in a hurry, for you missed some words and added more punctuations than needed. Well the overall plan is exciting, i wish you luck to continue and i'll be waiting for the next chapter!
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p.S : I don't think that you are clueless about an 'end', because the way it is written say that there's a plot behind...
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The story is great by the way.
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I also read Albus & James Potter, and i think it was a great job!
4/3/2010 c1 15Elena Forest
I rather like the idea! If you had a stronger idea of where you were going with it, I think it coulda been a bit better. You have some sentances that don't connect and commas in the places of periods. It may be a bit annoying, but it's not unreadable. Well, I hope you update soon :3
15Elena ForestI rather like the idea! If you had a stronger idea of where you were going with it, I think it coulda been a bit better. You have some sentances that don't connect and commas in the places of periods. It may be a bit annoying, but it's not unreadable. Well, I hope you update soon :3
4/3/2010 c1 50Miyano Ran
hm, nice idea :)
there are some typographical errors though...
first, the "Fall" of the organization shouldn't be capitalized, then, Rab, should be Ran, then, Principle should be Principal. and "shinichi" should be capitalized.
'Ran, it's confidential, i cannot, but now it's over, i won't leave you again.' Shinichi replied with a smile.
and in this line, it's nicer to say "I cannot tell you." to make it complete.
and "shiho" should be capitalized.
hm... and I think Shinichi would call her "Haibara" instead of Shiho cuz' he never calls her Shiho in the manga/anime. Well, haha, I do that a lot in my stories too... :)
Nice chapter, looking forward to your next. Good luck!
~Miyano Ran ^.~
50Miyano Ranhm, nice idea :)
there are some typographical errors though...
first, the "Fall" of the organization shouldn't be capitalized, then, Rab, should be Ran, then, Principle should be Principal. and "shinichi" should be capitalized.
'Ran, it's confidential, i cannot, but now it's over, i won't leave you again.' Shinichi replied with a smile.
and in this line, it's nicer to say "I cannot tell you." to make it complete.
and "shiho" should be capitalized.
hm... and I think Shinichi would call her "Haibara" instead of Shiho cuz' he never calls her Shiho in the manga/anime. Well, haha, I do that a lot in my stories too... :)
Nice chapter, looking forward to your next. Good luck!
~Miyano Ran ^.~