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5/3/2012 c1 1bad demon
i really adore your storys

this was is really great
12/28/2010 c1 3C0smic
Since u were kind enough 2 review my story I shall review yours! Lol! I can tell this is going 2 b an intersante story!
5/2/2010 c1 56Metronomeblue
That's fun! I like Katy Perry too! Hot N' Coild is one of my favorite songs, so when I walk around singing, I bet Itachi would burst out laughing if he saw how ridiculous I look... TT-TT
Heh, anyway, I LOVE Itachi! So this is awesome.
Natsu-Tan
4/29/2010 c1 5DeathBlossom18
Like the story just, space it out more; halarious! ;D
4/17/2010 c1 7Isa-Wildfire
i 3 u D amazing, hilarious of course errors here and there but i know you and excpect that (what is that supposed to mean said rose shrilly) Why is that all your Oc's have that attitude I mean Diamond would want to effing die if Daemon found out lol
4/6/2010 c1 sabakunogrim1995
nice idea and grammar although, you could write 'she' instead of 'Rose'.

Space the sentences under each other it makes it easier to read.

Other than that it was well written.

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