for An Easter Prayer4/18/2010 c1 
52mrsProbie
This is not a fanfiction. Perhaps you have misunderstood the point of this website; I will clarify. FFN's purpose is to allow fanfiction writers to upload their *fanfiction.* I am aware you love God. I do, too. I just don't go about posting about it on websites not intended to host my prayers of thanks. Create a blog, post on , or find a Christian website whose intent is to help people like you find a good place to host things like this.
And keep it off FFN.
Besides the fact that this is not a fanfiction, this was well written. However, there are a few grammatical errors I would like to address: in the sentence, "You while on the cross you took my sin away from me," you only need one "you" in the sentence. Otherwise, it is grammatically incorrect. The proper sentence would be either "You, while on the cross, took my sin away from me," or "While on the cross, you took my sin away from me."
The same advice applies to the other sentences where you made this mistake.
52mrsProbieThis is not a fanfiction. Perhaps you have misunderstood the point of this website; I will clarify. FFN's purpose is to allow fanfiction writers to upload their *fanfiction.* I am aware you love God. I do, too. I just don't go about posting about it on websites not intended to host my prayers of thanks. Create a blog, post on , or find a Christian website whose intent is to help people like you find a good place to host things like this.
And keep it off FFN.
Besides the fact that this is not a fanfiction, this was well written. However, there are a few grammatical errors I would like to address: in the sentence, "You while on the cross you took my sin away from me," you only need one "you" in the sentence. Otherwise, it is grammatically incorrect. The proper sentence would be either "You, while on the cross, took my sin away from me," or "While on the cross, you took my sin away from me."
The same advice applies to the other sentences where you made this mistake.