8/12/2010 c11 41Authoressinhiding
I am now caught up with one installment! Only seven more chapters to go!
I am now caught up with one installment! Only seven more chapters to go!
8/12/2010 c6 Authoressinhiding
More of the Pirates characters? Does this mean Will? I'm hoping not Lizzy. For the life of me, I just don't like that wench.
More of the Pirates characters? Does this mean Will? I'm hoping not Lizzy. For the life of me, I just don't like that wench.
7/11/2010 c2 Authoressinhiding
I'm back to reviewing this story! Sorry I've been so lax and such a bad authoress-friend. It may take me a while, but in the next week, I promise to get fully caught up!
Mer
I'm back to reviewing this story! Sorry I've been so lax and such a bad authoress-friend. It may take me a while, but in the next week, I promise to get fully caught up!
Mer
6/14/2010 c11 31foreverkneeld
Heavens! What an ending! May I just say, I love the chapter title. Hilarious.
Can't wait for more!
God keep you,
Eavis
Heavens! What an ending! May I just say, I love the chapter title. Hilarious.
Can't wait for more!
God keep you,
Eavis
6/13/2010 c11 1Puppet White
Yay! This one is over! Now let the action begin!
I cannot explain my love for this story in big words! Awesome! Amazing! Fantastic!
Even though this one didn't have the humor in it like in the last one, it was still pretty funny, not a lot of randomness though...I love you randomness...
Oops, I saw a few spelling mistakes! Well, thats fine I guess.
Weird, I went to the zoo again today and saw my true love again...then I was thinking about this story, and I was rather shocked when I saw the forward alert for this story, and I laughed out loud...because...well the last time I saw him I read this story, so odd, huh?
Anyways, you got a cute disclaimer? Wow...thank you so much!
Well, I will see you on the other side! Goodbye!
Yay! This one is over! Now let the action begin!
I cannot explain my love for this story in big words! Awesome! Amazing! Fantastic!
Even though this one didn't have the humor in it like in the last one, it was still pretty funny, not a lot of randomness though...I love you randomness...
Oops, I saw a few spelling mistakes! Well, thats fine I guess.
Weird, I went to the zoo again today and saw my true love again...then I was thinking about this story, and I was rather shocked when I saw the forward alert for this story, and I laughed out loud...because...well the last time I saw him I read this story, so odd, huh?
Anyways, you got a cute disclaimer? Wow...thank you so much!
Well, I will see you on the other side! Goodbye!
6/7/2010 c10 31foreverkneeld
Ooh, no fries, sory. But I wuv de chapter! Yay for mind communication.
God keep you,
Eavis
Ooh, no fries, sory. But I wuv de chapter! Yay for mind communication.
God keep you,
Eavis
6/6/2010 c10 1Puppet White
Awesome awesome awesome!
This is my FAVORITE chapter so far! There was randomness! Praise the Lord! Really do praise the Lord! He did a miracle for me just a few days ago! (If you want to know just send me a PM)
Gravy? Yes there was gavy! Yay!
I love the "Gandalf the White" part, that made me laugh soo hard! I'm a total nerd when it comes to that so that was very pleasent suprise!
Poor Jack! get'em back! *said in singing voice* But then again what plot would you have if you did that? So don't listen to me! *starts choking hand*
You lended me breath! Your a life saver!
May God bless your soul, so you can improve! And bless you life too.
Can't wait until you update!
Awesome awesome awesome!
This is my FAVORITE chapter so far! There was randomness! Praise the Lord! Really do praise the Lord! He did a miracle for me just a few days ago! (If you want to know just send me a PM)
Gravy? Yes there was gavy! Yay!
I love the "Gandalf the White" part, that made me laugh soo hard! I'm a total nerd when it comes to that so that was very pleasent suprise!
Poor Jack! get'em back! *said in singing voice* But then again what plot would you have if you did that? So don't listen to me! *starts choking hand*
You lended me breath! Your a life saver!
May God bless your soul, so you can improve! And bless you life too.
Can't wait until you update!
5/31/2010 c9 Puppet White
Whoops, sorry for taking soooooo long, got a little busy! *sobs* It won't happen again I swear!
Uhg! I know how you feel, about the dream thing, you get such an awesome dream...then you wake up before the ending, it's like God wants you to figure it out yourself, which means CHALLENGE! I love challenge! But it can be aggravating at times...
What? No gravy? Why no gravy! *sob*
I will not give up on you in the random dept, please put some more randomness!
Well, at least you saved my life...again! Thank you, thank you and thank you!
YES! Yes! Yes! Jack is back, and she is going back, and James is going back, and my back is back to the back doctor in the backlands way back in time! Well think I said enough b words...what?...Lord, what are you trying to say?...stop now or else?...right okay, back to the review! Oops! Ow, that hurt w-wait, I'm sorry!
(55 minutes later) Oh my God, that was...*shivers* never mind, well...all I have to say now is can't wait until you update!
Whoops, sorry for taking soooooo long, got a little busy! *sobs* It won't happen again I swear!
Uhg! I know how you feel, about the dream thing, you get such an awesome dream...then you wake up before the ending, it's like God wants you to figure it out yourself, which means CHALLENGE! I love challenge! But it can be aggravating at times...
What? No gravy? Why no gravy! *sob*
I will not give up on you in the random dept, please put some more randomness!
Well, at least you saved my life...again! Thank you, thank you and thank you!
YES! Yes! Yes! Jack is back, and she is going back, and James is going back, and my back is back to the back doctor in the backlands way back in time! Well think I said enough b words...what?...Lord, what are you trying to say?...stop now or else?...right okay, back to the review! Oops! Ow, that hurt w-wait, I'm sorry!
(55 minutes later) Oh my God, that was...*shivers* never mind, well...all I have to say now is can't wait until you update!
5/30/2010 c9 31foreverkneeld
Ooh, lovely. You know, Amy's 'talent' reminds me of Matilda - a character in one of Roald Dahl's books. But anyway- I love this chapter. Amy's interaction with Jack is stunning, as usual, and you've really endeared James to me. (I never really liked Will anyway. And Jack has too many fan-girls as it is) I think he's my favourite.
God be with you,
Eavis
Ooh, lovely. You know, Amy's 'talent' reminds me of Matilda - a character in one of Roald Dahl's books. But anyway- I love this chapter. Amy's interaction with Jack is stunning, as usual, and you've really endeared James to me. (I never really liked Will anyway. And Jack has too many fan-girls as it is) I think he's my favourite.
God be with you,
Eavis
5/27/2010 c8 Swann Shooter
...and I squee with joy, again. You've no idea how much reading this story (again) entertains me. I really appreciate such great story telling.
...and I squee with joy, again. You've no idea how much reading this story (again) entertains me. I really appreciate such great story telling.
5/24/2010 c8 1Puppet White
I will be honest, this wasen't your best chapter ever but it was alright I guess...and I also guess it was just setting up for the future...*pouts* randomness...my sweet...come back to me!
Jack! There was Jack in this! Yay! And a plan is also sweet...just like randomness...and Dove chocolate!
You...*sniff* you let me breathe again...*mouthing I love you*
Gravy! There was gravy? I must be special! But not special enough to have randomness...
Cookies? You want cookies? Well, I guess you can have some...but only three mini cookies! Wait doesen't sugar make people crazy? Here have three giant cookies!
Can't wait until you update!
I will be honest, this wasen't your best chapter ever but it was alright I guess...and I also guess it was just setting up for the future...*pouts* randomness...my sweet...come back to me!
Jack! There was Jack in this! Yay! And a plan is also sweet...just like randomness...and Dove chocolate!
You...*sniff* you let me breathe again...*mouthing I love you*
Gravy! There was gravy? I must be special! But not special enough to have randomness...
Cookies? You want cookies? Well, I guess you can have some...but only three mini cookies! Wait doesen't sugar make people crazy? Here have three giant cookies!
Can't wait until you update!
5/24/2010 c8 31foreverkneeld
Yay! An update! I wonder how these things will all work out...And I suppose I'll find out. Sooner or later. :-)
Bad luck about the wisdom teeth, love. I'll pray for you.
Waiting for more,
Bado go Eru,
Eavis
Yay! An update! I wonder how these things will all work out...And I suppose I'll find out. Sooner or later. :-)
Bad luck about the wisdom teeth, love. I'll pray for you.
Waiting for more,
Bado go Eru,
Eavis
5/17/2010 c7 foreverkneeld
Oh! Oh! More! Right away!
I love this. Really truly muchly. (Wait..not a word. Oh well)
So pwease, hurry and do some more!
God be with you,
Eavis
P.S. Don't I just wish I could memorize soundtracks like that...words with music, yes, soundtracks, er...not so much.
Oh! Oh! More! Right away!
I love this. Really truly muchly. (Wait..not a word. Oh well)
So pwease, hurry and do some more!
God be with you,
Eavis
P.S. Don't I just wish I could memorize soundtracks like that...words with music, yes, soundtracks, er...not so much.
5/15/2010 c7 1Puppet White
Ahh, a smigon of randomness...wait...only a smigon? Weel at least it's more random then the guy I box...boy he is lame! Ha ha ha
Gravy! My precious! It was tolen from me for a little while...but now it back thank you...preciousssssss...
You no what the other day I was at the zoo and I found my truest love there, a dark horse maybe 20 hands,blueish black coat, with a wavy black mane...as I said I found my truest love, and he liked me! Everone else that was line up on the wall he ignored! And he came straight to me...I peted him for 50 minutes then I had to be dragged away by my mom! I cryed for a little bit, but I'll always have next time! (sob)
Sorry for my rambling I just coudn't help myself...anyways, you spelling was perfect, I didn't see one mistake! YAY!
And you said that Ames and Jack still have a connecetion between there minds, why arn't they talking? Or showed in some that they can read each others mind? Hm? Hm?
You are a life-saver you let me breath again!
Can't wait until you update...awww...not again!
Ahh, a smigon of randomness...wait...only a smigon? Weel at least it's more random then the guy I box...boy he is lame! Ha ha ha
Gravy! My precious! It was tolen from me for a little while...but now it back thank you...preciousssssss...
You no what the other day I was at the zoo and I found my truest love there, a dark horse maybe 20 hands,blueish black coat, with a wavy black mane...as I said I found my truest love, and he liked me! Everone else that was line up on the wall he ignored! And he came straight to me...I peted him for 50 minutes then I had to be dragged away by my mom! I cryed for a little bit, but I'll always have next time! (sob)
Sorry for my rambling I just coudn't help myself...anyways, you spelling was perfect, I didn't see one mistake! YAY!
And you said that Ames and Jack still have a connecetion between there minds, why arn't they talking? Or showed in some that they can read each others mind? Hm? Hm?
You are a life-saver you let me breath again!
Can't wait until you update...awww...not again!