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9/25/2014 c1 2ClearMortality
I love how you started this of with Syaoran and Sakura picking up Kurogane, rather than hitting off with Kurogane and Fai (Yuui). You did a great job with the apocalypse-like setting, and the zombie killing off Sakura and Syaoran and little Mokona was a nice touch. Although, I'm rather skeptical as to why they didn't go after Kurogane, whowas very much vulnerable after he got knocked out.

How you introduced in Fai was quite exciting to read. How Fai coped with the fact that his twin was once Kurogane's lover was also quite enjoyanle for someone like me who enjoys a good angst story.

I reeeaaallyyy love how you made Fai be a pilot in this story. And how he tried to save Kurogane evem thlugh he was bitten and infected. The vampirism was a nice touch too although Fai killing Kurogane at the near end was quite a nervewrecking thing to read. Still, it's amazing how well you've writen everything.

You adding Kamui and Subaru at the end was a winner. Like, it just paves the way for so many possible sequels and one-shots that my heart is pounding at the thought of a possible sequel or even an AU.

Sooooo yeah, I really enjoyed reading this and the story definitely deserves a favorite :-) :-) :-)
9/19/2012 c1 Kisaru-ouhisama
Awesome story! Couldn't stop reading! Loved the ending. Lol XP
9/2/2011 c1 4Closed-Off-Vermillion
This was the most beautiful tragedy story i have ever read
4/10/2011 c1 4L.E.N.E.X
Best fucking AU KuroFai EVER~~~!

God I cried, I smirked, I questioned it, I fucking loved it.

I love how this was also sooo sooo parallel to the main TRC plot line without actually being the same. So so so fucking good! I wonder if it is from this Kurogane and Fai that Subaru and Kamui got their vampirism and then they are the vampire twins that tie into the main plot line of TRC... if so that is so fucking bloody brilliant!

GREAT AMAZING JOB! I loved this sooooo much! 333
4/2/2011 c1 8Fujoshi Laivine
You know, at first I wasn't expecting much from this, just because into zombies, but I actually really like how you did it! If you told me there was a sequel or another chapter or something, I'd definitely read it in a heart beat. Keep up the good work!
10/15/2010 c1 2RemaSofiRuin
I agree with lemonlimediddies. TOTALLY EPIC!

When I first read this story i didn't have an account and the second time it was past 3 in the morning and i cried. I looked it up again specifically to review and reread. I love it all and this defiantly deserves more reviews than it's gotten. Please keep writing. you're amazing for creating this work of art!
9/23/2010 c1 ShadowHatter
Read this awhile back when I was in hiding, so I didn't leave a review (sorry!) but I came upon it today and looked at it again... only thirteen reviews? That's a crime.

I usually don't read things marked Character Deaths, specially in pairings I like, but I decided to give this one a shot, and god was it good. :) Your writing is excellent, your development of the plot is wonderful, and it flows and is easy to read. One thing I might suggest is that it is pretty long for a one shot- I know you posted it a long time ago, but maybe re-uploading it in segments. Also, (I haven't checked your profile yet, so I'm not sure) I'm sure any sequel to this would be very good.

In addition, your AU's Zombie law was realistic and interesting, as well as the development of Fai's disease. The ending was a nice twist, I think, and I really, REALLY, REEEEAAALLLYYYY (Caps and drawn out words really don't do it justice as to how much I) REEEEAAAAALLLLYYY liked this piece of work. Hi-five of awesomeness to you.

~Shadowhatter
9/5/2010 c1 4lemonlimediddies
that was epic.
8/31/2010 c1 kurofai
this pulled on my heart srtings. are you going to continue this?
8/31/2010 c1 kurofai
this story sounds a bit like the move i am legend... good story! makes me feel depressed.
6/19/2010 c1 32Romancelover1321
Okay I have to say one comment before I continue. What the hell were you watching when you wrote this thing? It is a good story don't get me wrong but it's just so...odd. It at first seems like a zombie horror film but then its has the Tsubasa spin and I don't what to think. I do like the way you kept everyone in character and that you incorporated Fai's twin. (who really is Yui if you didn't know) Though I do kind of find it interesting and sad that you brought both the twins in at the end. Other than that I would have to say thank you for putting in Syaron and Sakura and Mokana! (What can I say? I have soft spot for talking pork buns) Keep on writing.
6/8/2010 c1 Rose of Shadows
You know those stories that really capture you and they're all you can think about at work or school? This was one of those. I absolutely LOVED this story! Straight into my favorites!
5/17/2010 c1 4emeraldgeminideathboar
wow your story just made its way into my favorite story list.

Is it just me or did this kinda seem like resident evil?
4/24/2010 c1 4luchia 11
This was one of the longest and greatest one-shots i have ever EVER read!I mean like the way it was written was AWESOME. The details were AWESOME and the ending was like so awesome!~

luchia11
4/21/2010 c1 25AllTheLosers
No words can describe how epically FKING AMAZING THIS WAS!

It was scary, but still awesome!
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