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7/6/2010 c10 10That Engineer
soo are the second group of survivors going with them or they're on there own?
7/6/2010 c10 roxasrules
Best. Chapter. Ever.

This is probably my FAVORITE chapter whenever i heard the name Amy and Andrew i was like OMG!

Awesome chapter i really liked them meeting Nelson and everyone from Back 4 More.

I think All 4 One is a good story name for the Sequel.

Favorite chapter 10/5 if that's possible...
7/6/2010 c10 Holy Clannad
HOLY FUCKING GOD,NICK'S LOOKING FOR JAMIE!*hypervinilating X)* HOLY SHIT,THIS JUST GOT WAAAAYYYY BETTER! also, All 4 one sounds better...
7/6/2010 c9 Holy Clannad
finally updated! whoo!
7/6/2010 c10 9Slicerness
i say pray 4 mercy. this was a little confusing due to the OC's but it was still a decent chapter. have the soldiers ever appeared in this fic before now? or were they new canon fodder?

OH, and check out the manga 'Highschool of the Dead' when you get a chance. the series is also an anime (which came out recently-ish, i think) but i haven't seen it yet so i can't judge.
7/5/2010 c10 goobyeeveryone
Loved the chapter and I can't wait to read the next one. And on the title thing I say go with All 4 One.
7/5/2010 c10 abandoned.396479948924280
OMG YAY! Dis made a very happy person today...or...tonight? Whatever its not important but YAY!
7/4/2010 c10 9Bishieluver01
Coach announced. "It's gonna be a long trip. Who wants to get some supplies?"

"I'll do it," Nick replied as he raised his banjo into the air. "I need to break this puppy in."

"I'll go with him," Ellis offered. "I don't see a cowboy hat on yer head Nick, so you're gonna need help."

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Was that a Tallahassee-slash-Zombieland referance I just saw there? ^^
7/4/2010 c10 Technocidal Maniac
Well, All 4 One sounds like a "Lone Wanderer" kind of story and Pray 4 More seems a bit... meh-ish. Maybe One 4 All? Since it's gonna be a group and teamwork is ESSENTIAL. I think it's good...
7/4/2010 c10 Fishy Crackers
I think All 4 One would be a better title for a future Southern Edition chapter. The next one in particular. Out of your choices, i'd have to choose Pray 4 Mercy, but with my own brain, i have thought of

Pray 4 Death

Lost 4 Ever

Gone 4 Good

AND FINALLY

Back 4 More: Electric Boogaloo
7/4/2010 c10 6Pikachu4Prezident
Well, I sure wasn't expecting to see Nelson and the others meet the L4D2 survivors. Nice continuity nod there, man.

For the title of the sequel, Pray 4 Mercy sounds like a pretty badass title.

Once again, great job on your story. I hope to see the sequel sometime soon.
7/3/2010 c9 roxasrules
I really liked Nick's jokes about Ellis.

The Librarian Witch was pretty funny too.

I was surprised this chapter got up so fast!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

I rate this chapter a 5/5 Perfect!
7/3/2010 c9 9Slicerness
while it was an awesome idea to have them go to a high school (nice shoutout with the name btw) but you could have milked it for a bit more. a jock charger/jockey, a group of common infected that look like the very definition of either a group of gossiping teenage girls or the chess club, a smoker that looked like a punk (as in, the type to smoke in the bathroom. add a dicarded cigarette as per tatse). the posibilities were rather high. still, nice job though.
7/2/2010 c9 SPARTAN-043
Yay! I really enjoyed this chapter. I was afraid it would be sad and uneventful. (Like the last chapter-OH SNAP! BUURRRRRN!) That bit with the witch librarian was totally brilliant! and using a highschool setting? wow, talk about taking advantage of the freedoms of the written word that videogames would normally avoid. (blunt ex: shootin the kibble out of a school! D: zomg!)

Heyheyheyheyheyhey! HEY! HAY!HEY!...Hey!
that boomer? I shoulda been like a cafeteria lady or somethin'.
cuz I got a friend who matches yo current description! D:
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joke. :P
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Anyway, glad to see some reemergence of the refreshing creative humor shown in the first B4M.

pps:
thanks for keeping the reviews to 'open' because I always forget the password to my account (immediately after signing in) and am tired of all the other writting badasses forcing me to endure the grueling password recovery process JUST so I can write pointless over-ellaborate review that they'll just lose in thier endless sea of asskissingand/or critique.
7/1/2010 c9 goobyeeveryone
I still love this writing style of yours. Great job on the chapter keep up the good work and all that jazz.
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