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12/25/2010 c1 Mystery girl13
Ok so I don't knw if u still taking oc but hers mine...name: Evelyn/age:15/appearance: long jet black hair really really green eyes/power: the 4 elements/ and that's all u can add in a crush or something Idc but I do have a request for her to b cya adopted sister youger of course but if u can't work that in that's cool
6/28/2010 c5 Mandy
read your profile. i lyke never said i hated you! jst lyke didn LOVE u! ANywayzz since im supehr nice ima review dis chap. da stories coming along well a little quick buttt oh well. still a lil based only around yuh but HOPEFULLIE it wnt b once dey get in2 skool -ML
6/27/2010 c5 8Dianna Phantom27
wow, am I the only one who noticed that Duplicate is a little too girly...

But, anyways, this is really good! I still like this story.
6/27/2010 c5 67Linzerj
SUGAR IS YUMMY! YUSH! WOO!

Yay, Lindsay comes! GO SHOPPING LINDSAY! GO SHOPPING ASAP! Don't buy her anything to... pink or frilly or girlyishy. Buy her natural colors, like green, brown, blue, and even purple, and neutrals like black, gray, and white. Buy her pink and she will murder you.

Lindsay: I don't murder people you dolt!

Me: I am you, kinda, so calling me a dolt is calling yourself a dolt!

Lindsay: How does that make any sense?

Me: ...I dunno...

Lindsay: ...Well, yeah, no pink frilly girlyishness, please!

Raven: Are 'girlyishy' and 'girlyishness' even words?

Me: No, they're MY words of MAGICALNESS!

Lindsay: Magicalness is also a word owned by Linzerj.

Raven: O.o
6/26/2010 c5 2The Mighty One
Hi Saffire! :-D

Quiet a steller update like always, and the way the characters are being told to go to the school under the orders of the city council and mayor, made it difficult to say no for each of them. Nice idea you came up with, and it was kinda funny, how it left off with, "Have a nice day." X-D

The shopping idea was strong too, and how Raven left the room to be all by herself was a very strong idea, being that she prefers to be alone, most of the time. ;-) Poor Falcon, wow, he did it this time, but I think Raven may try to cheer him up. Maybe, but I'm sure you'll throw a whole batch of surprises at me. ;-)

GREAT update Saffire! Do keep up your hard work, as this story continues to build and expand across my mind with ceasless wonder. The other characters are also being incorperated into this nicely, and you give each OC and Orriginal Titan their moments. Where you plan to take Falcon and Saffire in their relationship, still has me on edge. :-O :-D You do a wonderful job, do keep up your powerful writing! ;-)

~~T.M.O~~
6/26/2010 c5 11PsychoticSushi
hahaha i love that last part of the letter:

"If you fail, we have no choice but to make you wanted criminals. Have a nice day, and see ya Monday!"

hahaha i laughed out loud on that one.

yea! you're updating! one tiny thing, though: i'm surprised Alexa doesn't take opportunities to annoy the crap out of her brother more. she's more of a random, devious, videogaming and prank-pulling type. know what i mean?

just saying! but i really like how this story's goin, glad the plot finally got in there.

...i wonder how long it'll take Saffire and Falcon to make up? hopefully not long!

UPDATE.
6/26/2010 c5 25RavenxIsxAxBlackxRose
yay! you updated! ya gotta love grace, right? haha great job!

black rose
6/26/2010 c5 anon
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6/26/2010 c5 12BG224
Nooo! I don't wanna go shopping :'(

Loved the chap it was short but its finally getting the plot in there...I hope nobody fails...well at least we know that most of the OCs are okay in writing class :) update soon

(Hey I've been wondering about a one-shot with the characters from our story but I'm not done yet. Will send u it when I am though!)
6/26/2010 c5 18The Queen of Pixies
update soon!
6/20/2010 c4 67Linzerj
AWESOME! Can't wait for Speedy's sis Lindsay to show up! XD
6/19/2010 c4 2The Mighty One
Nice update Saffire. ;-) The events connected together very well, where each scene was detailed and full of conflicting emotions, for all of the characters.

It may have been a while, but you have plenty of other stories also going on, and yes, school was also on-going for ya. So, don't worry about it. :-)

The turmoil within Falcon continues to grow stronger also, and how Elizabeth is being questioned on her feelings over the matter, over Falcon, then never fully getting a chance to speak as someone interupts; and it allows the characters a moment to breathe from being interigated or pressed down by their fellow teammates. Whoa! Yikes! :-O Robin being dressed as a girl was a very shocking twist. I kinda feel sorry for the guy, but it was still a super funny update. X-D There were comic moments for everyone. From Falcon being locked inside his bedroom, and having hundreds of Duplicates inside to block him. X-D Then how all of the girls kept on chasing after Beast Boy's sister; wow, the Titans do know how to have some fun, and play quiet the pranks on each-other also.

Good work Saffire, as the conflict for deeper feelings is bound to grow out of their hands also, and I have a feeling to be on quiet the suspenseful ride, with many more twists yet to befall me. :-) Do keep up your wonderful writing.

~~T.M.O~~
6/18/2010 c4 25RavenxIsxAxBlackxRose
yay! you updated! i loved it(of course) great job and update soon! love graces clothes haha!

black rose
6/18/2010 c4 xxxtitansrockhardxxx
Awesome you updated! Robin in Pink! Priceless! I can't wait to see Ryan in the story it so funny so far!
6/18/2010 c4 3sayainking90
excuse me he's in pink hahahahahahahahahahahah wait wait hahahahahahahahahah, ok ok i'm done im done, good chapter and nice chiffhanger withe the letter hope to see a new chapter soon
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