
6/9/2019 c2 UpdatePlease
Please Update please updateeeeeee.
Please Update please updateeeeeee.
10/7/2014 c2 Nekophile
HURRY AND CONTINUE IT. I REALLY REALLY REALLY CAN'T WAIT !
HURRY AND CONTINUE IT. I REALLY REALLY REALLY CAN'T WAIT !
8/12/2014 c2 BlueStarLightCB
It's been so long please continue this story i quite enjoy thins !please!
It's been so long please continue this story i quite enjoy thins !please!
2/1/2014 c2 Readeress
I've read this and I like the suspense. Good job! XD
And now I've even reviewed.
So...
WHEN you're gonna UPDATE! I'm desperate! DX
I've read this and I like the suspense. Good job! XD
And now I've even reviewed.
So...
WHEN you're gonna UPDATE! I'm desperate! DX
10/8/2011 c2 anna
u basterd make another chapter already! come on its soooooo much suspence!
u basterd make another chapter already! come on its soooooo much suspence!
4/18/2011 c2
3FedoraGirl90
Thanks for the great story! I feel so bad for Yoshimori. Can't wait for the next update, post another chapter soon ^_^

Thanks for the great story! I feel so bad for Yoshimori. Can't wait for the next update, post another chapter soon ^_^
3/18/2011 c2 aryaa
I love you and your stories so HURRY AND UPDATE! I'm dying with curiousity!
I love you and your stories so HURRY AND UPDATE! I'm dying with curiousity!
2/25/2011 c2
20Vampy
Wow! You know the first chapter was a bit hard to follow, but this chapter had none of those issues! It's great! Guurr! Suspense! *bites nails* And yay! Masamori! I really loved how your wrote him, very Masa like. Can't wait for the next chapter! XD

Wow! You know the first chapter was a bit hard to follow, but this chapter had none of those issues! It's great! Guurr! Suspense! *bites nails* And yay! Masamori! I really loved how your wrote him, very Masa like. Can't wait for the next chapter! XD
2/21/2011 c2
52addie-cake
Poor Yoshimori! Still, I would like to see you continue this story. I really like it.

Poor Yoshimori! Still, I would like to see you continue this story. I really like it.
2/19/2011 c2
6Silver Wolf 551
You HAVE to keep writing, I L-O-V-E it! No corrections, minus the japanese honorfic-things. I know more or less what the are, but what are 'Gaki' and 'Aniki'? Anyways, keep writing~!
~Silver Wolf 551

You HAVE to keep writing, I L-O-V-E it! No corrections, minus the japanese honorfic-things. I know more or less what the are, but what are 'Gaki' and 'Aniki'? Anyways, keep writing~!
~Silver Wolf 551
2/16/2011 c2 DuskyNights
I wonder what happens next! Eh...if you're going to add gore to the story now and alot of it then maybe you should change the rating from 'T' to 'M' at some point. I'm not saying you should I'm just...saying.
Well anyway update soon!
I wonder what happens next! Eh...if you're going to add gore to the story now and alot of it then maybe you should change the rating from 'T' to 'M' at some point. I'm not saying you should I'm just...saying.
Well anyway update soon!