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4/10/2010 c2 99Saeshmea
Hi!

I've not been able to be the first one to review this time XD, but thanks for the special mention on the first chapter ;), I don't think I deserve it, I'm just one more reader and fan of your fics, but thanks, thanks THANKS!

It's LOVELY to see you've finally find the time to post this new version of the fic... The beggining is really very different! I guess it will be interesting seeing how will Albus manage to reunit his familly again... He really didn't take any time to think about it doing everything without telling Minerva... .. .

And... I don't like Elisabeth... I think she's taken her job as Evelyn's mother too seriously... I'd like to know if her husband knows how she' treats Albus... I mean, I understand she's who has grown up the girl, but Albus and Mina are her real parents... .. . and, more over Minerva, who couldn't decide anything... .. .

I think this is the longest review I've ever wirtten in the web... but I loved the first plot of this fic, and I'm really looking forward to learn more about the new one!

Update soon! Kisses!
4/10/2010 c1 Dream's Girl
ah ok, i know this story(the first version) and can't wait for more))

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