for Konaha High School Drama6/24/2014 c2 kat12
That's was awesome I hope you'll update soon!
That's was awesome I hope you'll update soon!
4/22/2012 c2 Miss.princess.Madness
i enjoyed it so far. ten+sasu= my fave so you cant really go wrong there haha. update soon mkay?
i enjoyed it so far. ten+sasu= my fave so you cant really go wrong there haha. update soon mkay?
3/1/2011 c1 
1Sasuke4Tenten
Woot! More SasuTen here on FF.net (: You should REALLY consider joining DeviantART and sharing your talents with the growing Sasuke/Tenten fanbase there. We have our own exclusive fanclub too which you should join.
Also, I'm featuring your works in the SasuTen Community here, if you don't mind. (:
1Sasuke4TentenWoot! More SasuTen here on FF.net (: You should REALLY consider joining DeviantART and sharing your talents with the growing Sasuke/Tenten fanbase there. We have our own exclusive fanclub too which you should join.
Also, I'm featuring your works in the SasuTen Community here, if you don't mind. (:
1/1/2011 c2 7bubblyimperfection 9 5
Haha that was hilarious! XDD haha although it's kinda weird to have Hinata act like that cuz you know she's more of a shy person xP but if that's how you want her then I'll comply ^^ but story's god but need more Tenten and Sasuke interaction before they start liking each other more =DD other than that everything's good! =DD
7bubblyimperfection 9 5Haha that was hilarious! XDD haha although it's kinda weird to have Hinata act like that cuz you know she's more of a shy person xP but if that's how you want her then I'll comply ^^ but story's god but need more Tenten and Sasuke interaction before they start liking each other more =DD other than that everything's good! =DD
8/15/2010 c2 Sasuten
Please continue this story it has great potential please update
Please continue this story it has great potential please update
5/27/2010 c2 6cherryxcherry
critical advice
your rushing through, spread it out and take it slow
you arent describing,
and the first line you have in chapter 1 is near identical to my first line in my sasuten fanfic,
good ideas though.
Read my fanfic, and see how much I have improved :)
I'll be checking up on you !
MWAHXMWAH
cherryxcherry
6cherryxcherrycritical advice
your rushing through, spread it out and take it slow
you arent describing,
and the first line you have in chapter 1 is near identical to my first line in my sasuten fanfic,
good ideas though.
Read my fanfic, and see how much I have improved :)
I'll be checking up on you !
MWAHXMWAH
cherryxcherry
4/12/2010 c2 PaperKunai
Lol, go Hina-chan! n_n
Don't feel bad Pinky, I just find you annoying sometimes, well, almost all the time n_nU.
Can't wait to see the talent show.
Update soon!
Love
~PaperKunai
Lol, go Hina-chan! n_n
Don't feel bad Pinky, I just find you annoying sometimes, well, almost all the time n_nU.
Can't wait to see the talent show.
Update soon!
Love
~PaperKunai
4/11/2010 c1 PaperKunai
Lol, poor Sasu-chan n_n
Anyway, this story caught my attention, please continue!
And, I have a question, can I help you push Pinky over the cliff? *puppy eyes*
XD update soon!
Love
~PaperKunai
Lol, poor Sasu-chan n_n
Anyway, this story caught my attention, please continue!
And, I have a question, can I help you push Pinky over the cliff? *puppy eyes*
XD update soon!
Love
~PaperKunai
4/11/2010 c1 Miyukin
Aw dammit no updates soon? I picked the wrong story to like! DX Now I can't say update asap...
Aw dammit no updates soon? I picked the wrong story to like! DX Now I can't say update asap...