for Floral Delights10/11/2018 c9 Starlight-chan
I wish I could write a story like that. No offense but would kaito even remember and doesn't shinchi not have a nickname
I wish I could write a story like that. No offense but would kaito even remember and doesn't shinchi not have a nickname
3/24/2017 c9 
7phantomstorymaker
OK. this story is really interesting and well written.
I like how the characters have been portrayed so far and the plot seems to be flowing smoothly.
I really hope you plan to update it.
7phantomstorymakerOK. this story is really interesting and well written.
I like how the characters have been portrayed so far and the plot seems to be flowing smoothly.
I really hope you plan to update it.
1/17/2017 c9 J.clou
Hello there!
I'm new to this fandom and just recently found this beautiful fic.
I know it has been 7 years since this fic was first published, but I would be the happiest person in the world of you would come back and complete this fic. I'm loving every one of your fics, but this fic had just left me hanging and Kaito with his pained heart.
Please continue ~ I will make sure to be here when you update this fic !
Hello there!
I'm new to this fandom and just recently found this beautiful fic.
I know it has been 7 years since this fic was first published, but I would be the happiest person in the world of you would come back and complete this fic. I'm loving every one of your fics, but this fic had just left me hanging and Kaito with his pained heart.
Please continue ~ I will make sure to be here when you update this fic !
10/7/2015 c9 27TETRACIDE
can u plz plz plz plz update? this is really good!
i know that military can be tiresome, but is it so busy that you can't squeeze a bit of your free time to write?
27TETRACIDEcan u plz plz plz plz update? this is really good!
i know that military can be tiresome, but is it so busy that you can't squeeze a bit of your free time to write?
3/10/2015 c9 5Shana-Fujioka
Hey, it's already been over 4 years since you last updated... I really like this story, it's really interesting. I hope Shinichi wakes up soon. :)
And how did Kaito managa to visit Shinichi? With everyone approving of course.
There was just one thing, where I was confused at first. In chapter 1 you write from Jodie's POV and in chapter 4 Conan's. I would advice you to write something like "A month ago" or however long it was at the begginning of chapter 2, because at first I didn't notice, that that you moved back in time.
And I really liked the scene, where Kid disguised himself as Ran. That was so funny! I didn't notice at first, until you wrote about the "chipper sound" and then I really had to laugh because he didn't want to take out the salmon with his fear of fish. :D
Anyway, I hope you will update this story someday.
5Shana-FujiokaHey, it's already been over 4 years since you last updated... I really like this story, it's really interesting. I hope Shinichi wakes up soon. :)
And how did Kaito managa to visit Shinichi? With everyone approving of course.
There was just one thing, where I was confused at first. In chapter 1 you write from Jodie's POV and in chapter 4 Conan's. I would advice you to write something like "A month ago" or however long it was at the begginning of chapter 2, because at first I didn't notice, that that you moved back in time.
And I really liked the scene, where Kid disguised himself as Ran. That was so funny! I didn't notice at first, until you wrote about the "chipper sound" and then I really had to laugh because he didn't want to take out the salmon with his fear of fish. :D
Anyway, I hope you will update this story someday.
2/18/2012 c9 5jasminliertha
Second last line, you wrote 'women' instead of 'woman' when referring to Hanako.
I kinda like the story, though it's a bit boring, I guess. This fic is promising, but the action is still a bit slow. If there were more chapters, it would likely be more interesting.
As for the chapter, I see that hints of love has seeped into Kaito's heart~ Fufu~
I hope that Kaito will be the one to be by Shinichi's side once the detective wakes up.
5jasminlierthaSecond last line, you wrote 'women' instead of 'woman' when referring to Hanako.
I kinda like the story, though it's a bit boring, I guess. This fic is promising, but the action is still a bit slow. If there were more chapters, it would likely be more interesting.
As for the chapter, I see that hints of love has seeped into Kaito's heart~ Fufu~
I hope that Kaito will be the one to be by Shinichi's side once the detective wakes up.
9/21/2011 c9 3TangerineTea
I'm really interested in the direction of this story (and of course, I love me any KaiShin I can get, mmhmm XD), and I hope that you haven't abandoned it. Military training, wow! You have my awed admiration :P I hope they haven't been working you too hard, and that you'll update again soon!
3TangerineTeaI'm really interested in the direction of this story (and of course, I love me any KaiShin I can get, mmhmm XD), and I hope that you haven't abandoned it. Military training, wow! You have my awed admiration :P I hope they haven't been working you too hard, and that you'll update again soon!
5/24/2011 c9 Hikari-Pandora
Lovely story, i's been quite exciting so far. i hope you make it long, I don't mind how rare the updates might be. I've got a feeling that it might be a while before Shin'ichi remembers everything, either way it's nice knowing I've still got some of this story to look forward.
Arigato, matta tsugi ni!
Lovely story, i's been quite exciting so far. i hope you make it long, I don't mind how rare the updates might be. I've got a feeling that it might be a while before Shin'ichi remembers everything, either way it's nice knowing I've still got some of this story to look forward.
Arigato, matta tsugi ni!
4/28/2011 c9 icarusdg
In all honest I have nothing bad to say about your writing, I really love how much work you put into it and I miss reading new chapters. I hope you find the inspiration to continue this an your other stories soon. Hope life is treating you well.
In all honest I have nothing bad to say about your writing, I really love how much work you put into it and I miss reading new chapters. I hope you find the inspiration to continue this an your other stories soon. Hope life is treating you well.