5/23/2011 c1 BB Always
This is possibly the best story I've ever read on fanfiction... and I've read alot. It's beautiful and addresses some of the issues that weren't properly done in season 5 (after the 100th episode) and in season 6. I don't know if you've watched Bones S6, but people make Brennan look like the victim, when actually it's not completely Booth's fault. The Death of the Queen Bee is one of my top 5 Bones episodes, and I always despaired that there weren't enough fics about it and how heart-broken Booth felt after what happened in the episode before. I loved the ending, it was beautiful. The whole thing was an artwork in itself. If I had an account here, I would definitely add it to my favourites list, no question about it. This was truly amazing. Thank you so much for writing it.
This is possibly the best story I've ever read on fanfiction... and I've read alot. It's beautiful and addresses some of the issues that weren't properly done in season 5 (after the 100th episode) and in season 6. I don't know if you've watched Bones S6, but people make Brennan look like the victim, when actually it's not completely Booth's fault. The Death of the Queen Bee is one of my top 5 Bones episodes, and I always despaired that there weren't enough fics about it and how heart-broken Booth felt after what happened in the episode before. I loved the ending, it was beautiful. The whole thing was an artwork in itself. If I had an account here, I would definitely add it to my favourites list, no question about it. This was truly amazing. Thank you so much for writing it.
9/12/2010 c1 49AllusionToAnIllusion
I just watched that episode last night and during her toast I kept thinking the same thing Booth just told her in your story. Great story, wish it would have actually happened.
I just watched that episode last night and during her toast I kept thinking the same thing Booth just told her in your story. Great story, wish it would have actually happened.
4/20/2010 c1 mumrulz
Sorry I am so late with my review . . . I'm going through a B&B funk & am finding it hard to get motivated or excited by anything B&B related...but having said that, I know that you write my kind of fics - & that is just what I need. Too many angsty fics out there at the moment (I blame HH solely for this).
**"How does a freak like that get so lucky?"
...I really did feel sorry for Brennan during this episode...the way her ex-classmates treated/spoke to her, no wonder she didn't like highschool. I really was wishing/hoping that Booth had stood up for her more at the reunion.
**...you have a date next week, already...it's like last week never happened...so soon..."
...so soon!...that is one thing that I CANNOT understand. He gave up on her...didn't even fight for 'them'...& in the same breath says that he is going to move on...it doesn't give much credence to his love for her.
**"I already told you, I can't change. I honestly don't know how."
...& this was the perfect opening for Booth (HH) to remind her that she already had been changing...but did he?...Did he?...N o o o ! Thank Goodness for you!
**"I'm sorry for all the times I made you feel like you weren't human. All those times that I made you feel like being a scientist and being who you are made you less than the loving, caring woman I know you to be.
...another sore point with me. We often hear of the "cruel" things that Brennan says to Booth...but there have also been many occassions where Booth has said the same to her, but that is not focused on. So again Thank you for addressing many of my personal issues here. lol
...& for giving us the ending that we wanted...that we needed.
Sorry that this was more of a rant than a review...that's my disillusionment showing through...but you did manage to make me forget that for a moment :-):-):-)
Sorry I am so late with my review . . . I'm going through a B&B funk & am finding it hard to get motivated or excited by anything B&B related...but having said that, I know that you write my kind of fics - & that is just what I need. Too many angsty fics out there at the moment (I blame HH solely for this).
**"How does a freak like that get so lucky?"
...I really did feel sorry for Brennan during this episode...the way her ex-classmates treated/spoke to her, no wonder she didn't like highschool. I really was wishing/hoping that Booth had stood up for her more at the reunion.
**...you have a date next week, already...it's like last week never happened...so soon..."
...so soon!...that is one thing that I CANNOT understand. He gave up on her...didn't even fight for 'them'...& in the same breath says that he is going to move on...it doesn't give much credence to his love for her.
**"I already told you, I can't change. I honestly don't know how."
...& this was the perfect opening for Booth (HH) to remind her that she already had been changing...but did he?...Did he?...N o o o ! Thank Goodness for you!
**"I'm sorry for all the times I made you feel like you weren't human. All those times that I made you feel like being a scientist and being who you are made you less than the loving, caring woman I know you to be.
...another sore point with me. We often hear of the "cruel" things that Brennan says to Booth...but there have also been many occassions where Booth has said the same to her, but that is not focused on. So again Thank you for addressing many of my personal issues here. lol
...& for giving us the ending that we wanted...that we needed.
Sorry that this was more of a rant than a review...that's my disillusionment showing through...but you did manage to make me forget that for a moment :-):-):-)
4/19/2010 c1 243Tadpole24
Leah!
I'm so sorry it took so long to review this one, I know the feeling with school work...it's painful!
I really loved it though! You definitely have a way with words. :) and I'm quite jealous of your ability to write dialogue, coz I just do not possess it. haha
I loved the whole part about how Brennan has changed, because she has! I really wish Booth would use that logic on her in the show. He should know by now that she only responds to logic!
I also loved the part where you had Brennan debating whether or not to link her arm through Booth's and then when he started playing with her hair. It's really all so sweet! :)
Thank you for writing, I loved it.
Em
xx
Leah!
I'm so sorry it took so long to review this one, I know the feeling with school work...it's painful!
I really loved it though! You definitely have a way with words. :) and I'm quite jealous of your ability to write dialogue, coz I just do not possess it. haha
I loved the whole part about how Brennan has changed, because she has! I really wish Booth would use that logic on her in the show. He should know by now that she only responds to logic!
I also loved the part where you had Brennan debating whether or not to link her arm through Booth's and then when he started playing with her hair. It's really all so sweet! :)
Thank you for writing, I loved it.
Em
xx
4/16/2010 c1 7Fishback1
You have no idea how happy i am to see you writing again! This was honestly so amzazingly woven into the storyline of the show! Esp loved the classic eavesdropping in the bathroom stall scene!
Also -the way you explained that Bones could love by basing it off her friendship speech. Very good fic!
You have no idea how happy i am to see you writing again! This was honestly so amzazingly woven into the storyline of the show! Esp loved the classic eavesdropping in the bathroom stall scene!
Also -the way you explained that Bones could love by basing it off her friendship speech. Very good fic!
4/16/2010 c1 20skagengiirl
*tear* This was beautiful - just BEAUTIFUL! Awesome awesome! I wanted to kill Brennan's former lab partner, who's name I've already forgotten, and all the others who trashed Brennan. Brennan is so much more worth than them.
*tear* This was beautiful - just BEAUTIFUL! Awesome awesome! I wanted to kill Brennan's former lab partner, who's name I've already forgotten, and all the others who trashed Brennan. Brennan is so much more worth than them.
4/16/2010 c1 31jremme
So thrilled you're writing again! Unfortunately, I cannot say the same for myself. We'll see how it goes. I'm reading this when I should be typing out my research paper, so I'm sorry if this review is awful! You just dove right back in as though you never left! A nice little follow up to a nice episode. Really liked the ending. :) Love all your stuff always. Again, so sorry about this review. Back to the boring paper for me!
So thrilled you're writing again! Unfortunately, I cannot say the same for myself. We'll see how it goes. I'm reading this when I should be typing out my research paper, so I'm sorry if this review is awful! You just dove right back in as though you never left! A nice little follow up to a nice episode. Really liked the ending. :) Love all your stuff always. Again, so sorry about this review. Back to the boring paper for me!
4/16/2010 c1 55Bond.Jane
Oh, I'm so glad you're back.
"I'm sorry for all the times I made you feel like you weren't human. All those times that I made you feel like being a scientist and being who you are made you less than the loving, caring woman I know you to be. I didn't change you Bones. I just helped you see what you were capable of. It was all you."
Spot on, my dear, spot on. People do not give Brennan sufficient credit. But it was always there. Otherwise, she would not have turned from him 6 years ago.
Beautifully done.
Did I tell you before how much I like your gentle writing?
Welcome back
Jane
Oh, I'm so glad you're back.
"I'm sorry for all the times I made you feel like you weren't human. All those times that I made you feel like being a scientist and being who you are made you less than the loving, caring woman I know you to be. I didn't change you Bones. I just helped you see what you were capable of. It was all you."
Spot on, my dear, spot on. People do not give Brennan sufficient credit. But it was always there. Otherwise, she would not have turned from him 6 years ago.
Beautifully done.
Did I tell you before how much I like your gentle writing?
Welcome back
Jane
4/15/2010 c1 CCB
Love it!
Love it!