for Training to Defeat Kronos and Voldomort5/25/2010 c5 Belinda is a cool pixie
This is good, even though the chapters are a bit short.
This is good, even though the chapters are a bit short.
5/1/2010 c4 
5Tyranae
Your story idea is pretty good, but you need to work on adding some action and something that will make your reader continue reading since chapter 3 was just a list of stuff they brought. Also, Perseus is spelled with an s, not a c.
5TyranaeYour story idea is pretty good, but you need to work on adding some action and something that will make your reader continue reading since chapter 3 was just a list of stuff they brought. Also, Perseus is spelled with an s, not a c.
4/25/2010 c1 SZWBN
Nice! If 'yall look in chapter 3, it says Annabeth brought fish. Good job, zombie!
Nice! If 'yall look in chapter 3, it says Annabeth brought fish. Good job, zombie!