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7/13/2011 c2 Rob H
Good story, but it's a little short. You could have expanded on it by having some of what happened before chapter 1, and extending the thing overall. Towards the end, it just feels like you're rushing things. Other then this, I found this to be very entertaining :D
6/22/2010 c2 Kraut007
No offense but this story is written on kindergarten level.

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