for Mother Earth's Revenge12/24/2010 c4 Zhenzhen87
hey i really love your story so far! please update soon! i want you to continue and i think you should write about the training!
hey i really love your story so far! please update soon! i want you to continue and i think you should write about the training!
6/2/2010 c4 
4Melt your Heart
Please update soon! Honestly. I'm not sure what you should next... Maybe throw somehting random in? Anywho, Please please please update soon or I'll call on my awesome godess-ly skills to force you! Muwhah- er, sorry. That was slightly creepy. Just update soon. = D
~melt your heart~
4Melt your HeartPlease update soon! Honestly. I'm not sure what you should next... Maybe throw somehting random in? Anywho, Please please please update soon or I'll call on my awesome godess-ly skills to force you! Muwhah- er, sorry. That was slightly creepy. Just update soon. = D
~melt your heart~
5/31/2010 c4 kei
well, you can start with some of the training, it doesn't have to be in detail, then write the fight scene, but if you're not confident about it, maybe get someone to help or write for you, while you tell them your ideas. After the fight, you can write the ending. I really look forward to it!
well, you can start with some of the training, it doesn't have to be in detail, then write the fight scene, but if you're not confident about it, maybe get someone to help or write for you, while you tell them your ideas. After the fight, you can write the ending. I really look forward to it!
5/25/2010 c4 AnnabethRenesmee
ye syou should write about them and when the camp gets there and how they react
ye syou should write about them and when the camp gets there and how they react
4/24/2010 c2 KittyBennet
This is a very original idea for a story and I enjoy your writing a lot. I really like the mix of people in here that go to find Summer, Aphrodite is always a fun read and I love, love, love Katie Gardner. I really liked Ares and Hephaestus coming in when the guy insulted Aphrodite, that was fun ;)
I hope you'll update soon ;)
This is a very original idea for a story and I enjoy your writing a lot. I really like the mix of people in here that go to find Summer, Aphrodite is always a fun read and I love, love, love Katie Gardner. I really liked Ares and Hephaestus coming in when the guy insulted Aphrodite, that was fun ;)
I hope you'll update soon ;)
4/22/2010 c2 bridgette
Please write more!
Please write more!
4/21/2010 c1 4Pastelpastry
I think your story, is really great so far. Except that sometimes it gets a bit confusing.. But I'm looking forwared to reading the next chapter :)
4PastelpastryI think your story, is really great so far. Except that sometimes it gets a bit confusing.. But I'm looking forwared to reading the next chapter :)
4/20/2010 c1 1Beautiful.Nightmare10
I LUV IT!i would of never thought of a plot like that!PURE GENIUS! u have 2 update SOON! :)
1Beautiful.Nightmare10I LUV IT!i would of never thought of a plot like that!PURE GENIUS! u have 2 update SOON! :)