for The Woods Outtakes7/10/2023 c1 
4JoVersify
Loved this little (well, not so little really) outtake. It was a nice departure from the stilted awkwardness and mild hostility these two are currently contending with.
I would be so mortified, I probably would have cried if I were in Bella's shoes, morphine or no morphine.
Okay... wiping from my mind to get back to the story!
Jo
4JoVersifyLoved this little (well, not so little really) outtake. It was a nice departure from the stilted awkwardness and mild hostility these two are currently contending with.
I would be so mortified, I probably would have cried if I were in Bella's shoes, morphine or no morphine.
Okay... wiping from my mind to get back to the story!
Jo
6/26/2015 c1 3McQuirk
What a great little companion fic! I can't wait to see how Bella and Edward are officially introduced to the vampires...
3McQuirkWhat a great little companion fic! I can't wait to see how Bella and Edward are officially introduced to the vampires...
6/15/2013 c1 8sparklevampFTW
I don't think I read this yet but now I've read it and just cry cry cry I miss this story. I've missed Bella's hilariousness an Edward's sweet-and-sadness and Doris's adorable grndmotherness. Please come back to this story! BABY COME BACK! YOU CAN BLAME IT ALL ON ME!
8sparklevampFTWI don't think I read this yet but now I've read it and just cry cry cry I miss this story. I've missed Bella's hilariousness an Edward's sweet-and-sadness and Doris's adorable grndmotherness. Please come back to this story! BABY COME BACK! YOU CAN BLAME IT ALL ON ME!
8/15/2011 c1 Lipbitestew
Dancing penguins on the dashboard. I can't. I'm begging like the desperate fic hoor I am. Please update soon!
Dancing penguins on the dashboard. I can't. I'm begging like the desperate fic hoor I am. Please update soon!
11/30/2010 c1 Willow
Ha Ha! Bella reminds me of a Paranoia pacient I read about.(Except this guy saw bugs and dwarfs!)
"Purple penguins" was just to much for me to handle. With out cracking up!
Ha Ha! Bella reminds me of a Paranoia pacient I read about.(Except this guy saw bugs and dwarfs!)
"Purple penguins" was just to much for me to handle. With out cracking up!
11/1/2010 c1 TeamKStewRPattz
Oh GOD
I love this one
yeah a little confusining but good!
miss ur story
we havent have more chapters&I REALLY REALLY LOVE it
hope u write soon
see ya :DD
Oh GOD
I love this one
yeah a little confusining but good!
miss ur story
we havent have more chapters&I REALLY REALLY LOVE it
hope u write soon
see ya :DD
9/11/2010 c1 16Corinne 22
HAHA Morphine is a bitch! I have had so many surgeries and open heart crap that it's mind screwing and last time I was given morphine all I did was cry. No laughter for me though. And definitly no penguins, although, I wish there was. lol
And mouse's orgasm? Ha! I love it. Stealing that one for future conversation, okay? :)
That was hilarious. Wonder why she chose that prompt, I like it.
Oh...bring on more chicky.
16Corinne 22HAHA Morphine is a bitch! I have had so many surgeries and open heart crap that it's mind screwing and last time I was given morphine all I did was cry. No laughter for me though. And definitly no penguins, although, I wish there was. lol
And mouse's orgasm? Ha! I love it. Stealing that one for future conversation, okay? :)
That was hilarious. Wonder why she chose that prompt, I like it.
Oh...bring on more chicky.
7/26/2010 c1 RileysGirl
LMAO that was hilarious! god i love your bella... she is such an awesome character!
"Undoing your-your-" "Jeans?"
LOL at that line. fantastic.
would love to see some more posted. maybe one from edwards POV as a special treat...? :)
xx
LMAO that was hilarious! god i love your bella... she is such an awesome character!
"Undoing your-your-" "Jeans?"
LOL at that line. fantastic.
would love to see some more posted. maybe one from edwards POV as a special treat...? :)
xx
6/13/2010 c1 latuacantante4him
Enjoyed it. Her reaction to the drugs were too funny. And then that dream.
Enjoyed it. Her reaction to the drugs were too funny. And then that dream.
6/12/2010 c1 24Camilla10
The M rating has me totally puzzled. Maybe we go M in our minds, reading, but there is nothing M in what you write. You are a tease with no release, if ever there was one. I am following the main story on twilighted, but I might switch here, unless what is posted on twilighted is different from what is posted here. FF is more user friendly.
The slow updating had made me forget about Carlisle making an appearance. Could you post short recaps when you eventually update?
24Camilla10The M rating has me totally puzzled. Maybe we go M in our minds, reading, but there is nothing M in what you write. You are a tease with no release, if ever there was one. I am following the main story on twilighted, but I might switch here, unless what is posted on twilighted is different from what is posted here. FF is more user friendly.
The slow updating had made me forget about Carlisle making an appearance. Could you post short recaps when you eventually update?
6/12/2010 c1 star574
Hmmmm. I think it's a good thing that i've never been givin morphine. I can just imagine what I would animate.
Hmmmm. I think it's a good thing that i've never been givin morphine. I can just imagine what I would animate.
5/23/2010 c1 lisazj
Wow, that was one twisted dream. I think the eyes in the woods are really there, but what do they belong to? Vampires, or something else?
Bella medicated is hilarious, loved her conversation with Doris. This made me laugh my a*s off: "as I descended the stairs, I heard Lauren shriek that her foot was caught.
Ha ha, hallway-hooker. Ha ha." Cracked me up! I wonder what that was supposed to be in the hallway when she was out there in the dream? Whatever is in the woods?
Edward sleeping in the bed with her could be so embarrassing if the sleep talking takes over. Of course if Edward really gets to sleep it may well be Bella comforting him. Can't remember what happens in the actual chapter, guess I need to go re-read! ;)
Wow, that was one twisted dream. I think the eyes in the woods are really there, but what do they belong to? Vampires, or something else?
Bella medicated is hilarious, loved her conversation with Doris. This made me laugh my a*s off: "as I descended the stairs, I heard Lauren shriek that her foot was caught.
Ha ha, hallway-hooker. Ha ha." Cracked me up! I wonder what that was supposed to be in the hallway when she was out there in the dream? Whatever is in the woods?
Edward sleeping in the bed with her could be so embarrassing if the sleep talking takes over. Of course if Edward really gets to sleep it may well be Bella comforting him. Can't remember what happens in the actual chapter, guess I need to go re-read! ;)