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5/18/2010 c1 TD699
Medicated Bella is freaking hilarious. There are some epic lines in this outtake:

- Oh, Bella, you little slice of slut-cake

- We're trying to catch the fourth-floor f*ckers

- ..almost swallowing a piece of dental floss..

LOL
5/12/2010 c1 taurus14
I liked the dancing penguins...that was cute! Bella's crazy dream had me wondering about Carlisle and how do the vampires mix it up with the humans in this story. But her dream seemed to hint that there is something very different about Dr. Cullen, even though she doesn't have a clue what that could be, and the fact that in her dream he had some kind of connection with the woods. This was a good outtake, would you be doing one on EPOV? I'd love to know what he's really thinking here, I do believe he's very attracted to Bella but with all his problems and his mood swings, I'd just like to know what he's thinking.
4/30/2010 c1 xxxxxxxooooooooooooooooooooo
Loved it! I laughed through most of it but the dream was very intriguing too. It makes me look forward to when Carlisle will be in the story. I went and re-read the chapters that were around this and now I think I am going to go back and re-read the whole story. That Bella is quite a character!
4/26/2010 c1 MaddysMom429
I thoroughly enjoyed this outtake. Nice to get to read more of your work, related to TW. Bella, and her morphine-induced silliness, had me laughing and smiling. I think we'd all take after her and let a few inappropriate comments slip out, accidentally, if we were in her position :P The dream sequence was great. Your writing is always so descriptive and vivid. I feel like I'm there, experiencing things right along w/the characters. A little "lemon slice" is always appreciated, too ... as long as D. and Mr. M aren't involved, of course ;)

Thank you for sharing with us :)
4/25/2010 c1 ffeli.m3
...aw I've missed reading your work. First, I must say I'm sorry. I haven't review you in months I think. But I did read you latest updates which are great! =) Your work has become my inner happy place. yayy. (You probably don't remember but I once concluded how much of a genius you are) =] I don't care if you don't share the thought, you are! Anyhow I owe you this review, cuz I couldn't keep holding this up. You deserve the credit. Hope you have a nice day/night.
4/24/2010 c1 guccisassy
Love this story!
4/23/2010 c1 beignet
I loved the outtake. I too have been unlucky enough to have suffered at the hands of morphine. It was not pretty! happy, sad, paranoid all in one. *shivers*

This really was a great chapter. Glad Lauren got caught up in the net...stupid whore.

As always, I anxiously await the next chapter.

XXOO

B
4/22/2010 c1 bouncy 72
Lol, hey bb. This was AWESOME. I killed myself laughing at Bella seeing the penguins, & then hearing them, but realising penguins can't talk. (*grin* it made it even funnier at the end when I read that that had actually happened to you)

Hehe & the KY conversation...*giggle*

Loved that she got Edward into bed with her *wink*

She really was hysterical to read about when she's high. Thanks for another super chapter :)
4/22/2010 c1 TheRugbymom
nicely done!
4/22/2010 c1 vivi42
ah stop teasing and on with the story...I'm suffering deprivation...my first and favourite fan fic...
4/21/2010 c1 Erikajo
Hi BP7!

That was a really fun ride! Still love this story :)

~ej
4/21/2010 c1 3squibstitcher
You write the best inner dialogue. I seriously laughed out loud several times. Thank you for that. :) I was so happy to see this update in my inbox. I squeed out loud and flocked to it eagerly like a fat pale tourist flocks to the beach on the first day of summer. ;)

XOXO
4/21/2010 c1 edith4lopez
I loved it! I had a great laugh... :D
4/21/2010 c1 6Darcyfitz1
Awesome outtake; it was so nice seeing the update in my email. Yay! :)
4/21/2010 c1 mountainlion718
damn, those must have been some good drugs...lol, well at least she was able to blame them since she got all touchy feely with Edward...:D
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