for Brett's story1/7/2011 c2 gotta3 brett
love this, cant wait 4 more!
love this, cant wait 4 more!
12/29/2010 c2 greenluvr14
Oh my gosh! Update soon please! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Oh my gosh! Update soon please! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
12/27/2010 c2 thatgingerprincess143
Mini Dialauge
Eddie: brett and patrice sitting in a...dairy queen kissing...
ME: HEYYYYY BRETT IS MINE
Lucy: No hes mine
me and Lucy hava sing off with the song the boy is mine
Kendra: WHAT ABOUT ME?
Brett&Patrice: Make Out
Archie: GET A ROOM!
EVAN: NOOOO PATRICE WAS MINE!
Lucy,Me and Kendra: WE CAN HELP! (sob because we dont have brett)
Patirce: what a bunch of overdramatic LOSERS...
hehe loved it
Mini Dialauge
Eddie: brett and patrice sitting in a...dairy queen kissing...
ME: HEYYYYY BRETT IS MINE
Lucy: No hes mine
me and Lucy hava sing off with the song the boy is mine
Kendra: WHAT ABOUT ME?
Brett&Patrice: Make Out
Archie: GET A ROOM!
EVAN: NOOOO PATRICE WAS MINE!
Lucy,Me and Kendra: WE CAN HELP! (sob because we dont have brett)
Patirce: what a bunch of overdramatic LOSERS...
hehe loved it
12/26/2010 c2 LoveAndy Samberg
this is really great! can't wait to read more. btw, hav u seen/been in the show?
this is really great! can't wait to read more. btw, hav u seen/been in the show?
12/21/2010 c1 LoveAndy Samberg
this is quite good. i was just ina production of 13 and I would love to read more of this.
this is quite good. i was just ina production of 13 and I would love to read more of this.
12/13/2010 c1 
3neophytepyrope
Wow, this is a really good story! But you really shouldn't tell ppl not to look at the last sentence because naturally they will look. And by saying that, I could expect it to be something shocking which made me be able to guess as I started reading. But overall it was a good story!
3neophytepyropeWow, this is a really good story! But you really shouldn't tell ppl not to look at the last sentence because naturally they will look. And by saying that, I could expect it to be something shocking which made me be able to guess as I started reading. But overall it was a good story!
7/24/2010 c1 Not signed in
This is really good! You should deffinantly keep up this story! I never thought Brett could end up with Patrice! Very creative! The only thing is in the summary u probably shouldn't have put the don't read the last scentence thing because naturally the fiirst thing I did was read the last scentence so ya! Other than that great job!
This is really good! You should deffinantly keep up this story! I never thought Brett could end up with Patrice! Very creative! The only thing is in the summary u probably shouldn't have put the don't read the last scentence thing because naturally the fiirst thing I did was read the last scentence so ya! Other than that great job!
6/16/2010 c1 SilverStarFire15
This is soooo cute! my community is doing this play, and i thought i would look at some fanfics! I have one problem: MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER! this is really good!
This is soooo cute! my community is doing this play, and i thought i would look at some fanfics! I have one problem: MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER! this is really good!
4/22/2010 c1 imaginingimpossible
Awesome! Wow, Brett with Patrice... cool! I like it. But you HAVE TO continue this! You CANNOT give us this and then make it a oneshot! NOT FAIR! Anyway, WHEN you continue this, PLEASE make the chappies longer!
Awesome! Wow, Brett with Patrice... cool! I like it. But you HAVE TO continue this! You CANNOT give us this and then make it a oneshot! NOT FAIR! Anyway, WHEN you continue this, PLEASE make the chappies longer!