for Family wake up call!2/2/2011 c2 
6Joanne Brandon
Ok SO far hooked. I know you haven't updated recently but please do you can't give me that and leave me hanging it is cruel!
6Joanne BrandonOk SO far hooked. I know you haven't updated recently but please do you can't give me that and leave me hanging it is cruel!
9/15/2010 c2 10CosmicEssence
ohhh so adorable...especially the image of Alan asking to be picked up and then sleeping on his brothers chest...definitely extend it i think, its too cute not to...please continue?
10CosmicEssenceohhh so adorable...especially the image of Alan asking to be picked up and then sleeping on his brothers chest...definitely extend it i think, its too cute not to...please continue?
5/9/2010 c2 204Loopstagirl
SQUEE! Oh my gosh, that was soo adorably cute, loved it!
can't wait to see which brother is going to get there first to rescue Alan from the huge spider!
This is gorgeous!
204LoopstagirlSQUEE! Oh my gosh, that was soo adorably cute, loved it!
can't wait to see which brother is going to get there first to rescue Alan from the huge spider!
This is gorgeous!
5/8/2010 c2 3guerrero
Aww! Poor Alan, a big spider! I would do exactly the same thing lol :) Hopefully someone will come running and squish it!
Love this story! Can't wait for more!
G!
3guerreroAww! Poor Alan, a big spider! I would do exactly the same thing lol :) Hopefully someone will come running and squish it!
Love this story! Can't wait for more!
G!
5/8/2010 c2 72criminally charmed
OK, is that huge to a toddler, or an actually huge spider?
Worried mixed with sweet humor. Perfect.
72criminally charmedOK, is that huge to a toddler, or an actually huge spider?
Worried mixed with sweet humor. Perfect.
5/8/2010 c2 83sammygirl1963
Awww, what a sweet scene at the table with Alan jumping into his father's arms...but did you have to torure the poor tyke with the spider crawling towards his toy box.
Can't wait to see which brother saves the day!
83sammygirl1963Awww, what a sweet scene at the table with Alan jumping into his father's arms...but did you have to torure the poor tyke with the spider crawling towards his toy box.
Can't wait to see which brother saves the day!
5/3/2010 c1 juho69
Very, very SWEET! Especially liked Alan's baby language; it makes him extra cute. And, always like Scott's role as 'big brother'. Please write chapter two soon!
Very, very SWEET! Especially liked Alan's baby language; it makes him extra cute. And, always like Scott's role as 'big brother'. Please write chapter two soon!
4/25/2010 c1 sammygirl1963
Aw, so cute. I think you should keep going. I love the bond you've already established between the youngest and oldest sibling.
Aw, so cute. I think you should keep going. I love the bond you've already established between the youngest and oldest sibling.
4/24/2010 c1 carol
congrats, on your first attempt. keep going. dont forget to add some drama
congrats, on your first attempt. keep going. dont forget to add some drama