4/23/2010 c1 jessica
so cute.
so cute.
4/22/2010 c1 DIGIFAN99
What I like about this story is that, even though Lucy Tracy dies the day Alan was born, she didn't die because of some sort of complication in the birth, I hate stories that have it to here Lucy just died after Alan's birth.
What I like about this story is that, even though Lucy Tracy dies the day Alan was born, she didn't die because of some sort of complication in the birth, I hate stories that have it to here Lucy just died after Alan's birth.
4/22/2010 c1 IITYWYGMAH
So Adorable, you must have younger siblings.
Kids are the same everywhere, my 3 baby sisters (10, 12, and 14 years younger) tried sneaking quietly into my room one early(3am) Easter morning, they were just a little excited about what they received from the bunny. took a few minutes to convince them that it would be too dark to search for the treats that early in the morning.
Tina
So Adorable, you must have younger siblings.
Kids are the same everywhere, my 3 baby sisters (10, 12, and 14 years younger) tried sneaking quietly into my room one early(3am) Easter morning, they were just a little excited about what they received from the bunny. took a few minutes to convince them that it would be too dark to search for the treats that early in the morning.
Tina
4/22/2010 c1 3guerrero
this is real cute and cool! But I think you missed a bit at the end - He didn't have the heart to wake them so he
I am hoping this is because there is going to be another chapter because I would really like to read some more.
G
this is real cute and cool! But I think you missed a bit at the end - He didn't have the heart to wake them so he
I am hoping this is because there is going to be another chapter because I would really like to read some more.
G
4/22/2010 c1 74Iniysa
This is a very cute story, but I think that the end is missing. :)
Lauren
'Jeff sighed in relief and slumped against the doorway. His heart was still pounding in fear. But as he looked towards his sons he couldn't find it in himself to be angry, his sons look so content lying there together. He didn't have the heart to wake them so he'
This is a very cute story, but I think that the end is missing. :)
Lauren
'Jeff sighed in relief and slumped against the doorway. His heart was still pounding in fear. But as he looked towards his sons he couldn't find it in himself to be angry, his sons look so content lying there together. He didn't have the heart to wake them so he'