2/25/2024 c1 HalfBlood Prince
This is great! I really hated how it was ignored that she was willing to abandon his friend, family, and village to scape with him…

11/23/2017 c1 hi
lmao kyuubi though.

6/23/2017 c1 Zen
Oh dude it was so funny

3/20/2015 c1 Guest
Naruro got Sasuke sloppy seconds. . Jiyiya got naruto sloppy seconds.

1/26/2013 c1 1TheDemonOfTheWindBomb
Umm I can't help but to think of this as somthing out of a 6 year old's mind that has found out about sex and wants to publicize his newfound knowledge. But was still pretty good. Damn Naruto is some kind of a Rape God

1/21/2013 c1 Guest
You just have a fuckin' weird and dirty mind, dude...Oh, and if you are going to write a fanfic, then at least have good grammar and decent (a two year old can write a rape scene better than you) writing skills...Are you the person in your class that was voted Most Likely To Be On Sex Offender's List? I'm sure all your peers secretly think so...Well, have a good day! :)

12/22/2012 c1 Guest
It was ... weird.

10/26/2012 c1 Guest
It's so bad its funny.