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This is reminding me a lot of Harley Quinn and Joker.
This is reminding me a lot of Harley Quinn and Joker.
3/11/2012 c7 
6Anvelite
It's sop cute and awsahhh(my own word for awesome) , axel reminds me of the joker in here, always grinning one second later he's choking someone and then next he acts like it never happened. Then before he kissed roxas, he said why so serious! Please continue!
6AnveliteIt's sop cute and awsahhh(my own word for awesome) , axel reminds me of the joker in here, always grinning one second later he's choking someone and then next he acts like it never happened. Then before he kissed roxas, he said why so serious! Please continue!
10/28/2010 c1 thefishmonster
The reason Roxas got all angsty seems to much like My Sister's Keeper
The reason Roxas got all angsty seems to much like My Sister's Keeper
7/18/2010 c6 no.1.important.but.still
Hey nice story, nothing I was expecting thats for sure but nice.
as for your queations:
1-keep the songs they are a nice touch
2-The idea of a sadistic relationship sounds way better with the environment
last a couple of tips: try making larger chapters if not more detailed, and try getting someone to edit your story it should help a bit. keep the story mooving!
Hey nice story, nothing I was expecting thats for sure but nice.
as for your queations:
1-keep the songs they are a nice touch
2-The idea of a sadistic relationship sounds way better with the environment
last a couple of tips: try making larger chapters if not more detailed, and try getting someone to edit your story it should help a bit. keep the story mooving!
5/4/2010 c1 Alek Wayne
More please? The story was good but, you need to work on grammer and spelling and punctuation. ^^;
More please? The story was good but, you need to work on grammer and spelling and punctuation. ^^;