for In His Arms5/18/2012 c1 Sonyadore
Hah! Got logged in this time (site wouldn't let me review last time...)
I like this one-shot and think that it shows some nice flexibility in your writing, you still have all the wonderful detail but the tone/ mood is different and I think that it's great you can alter characters slightly.
I thought the reactions you wrote for Kagome and Sango and Inuyasha's revelation were great and very in character for the anime.
I'm really looking forward to getting to your other fics... sigh I need to steal that watch off of "Clock Stoppers" though...
Sonyadore
Hah! Got logged in this time (site wouldn't let me review last time...)
I like this one-shot and think that it shows some nice flexibility in your writing, you still have all the wonderful detail but the tone/ mood is different and I think that it's great you can alter characters slightly.
I thought the reactions you wrote for Kagome and Sango and Inuyasha's revelation were great and very in character for the anime.
I'm really looking forward to getting to your other fics... sigh I need to steal that watch off of "Clock Stoppers" though...
Sonyadore
8/16/2011 c1 inukags
this story is soo sweet.
this story is soo sweet.
10/17/2010 c1 
4suckerforromance234
awww sooo sweet! Inuyasha was adorable and Kagome was so sweet to. you should write more stuff like this. please review some of my work also if you like. i think your a great writer! :D
4suckerforromance234awww sooo sweet! Inuyasha was adorable and Kagome was so sweet to. you should write more stuff like this. please review some of my work also if you like. i think your a great writer! :D
8/22/2010 c1 1inuyashalover8996
I liked it but did you ever thing about adding on to it? It was really cool how you added on to the episode. That i really like. Good work and keep that up.
1inuyashalover8996I liked it but did you ever thing about adding on to it? It was really cool how you added on to the episode. That i really like. Good work and keep that up.
4/26/2010 c1 8Inume-blue
thats a pretty good asumption of how inuyasha would act. hee hee. I thought it was sweet.
8Inume-bluethats a pretty good asumption of how inuyasha would act. hee hee. I thought it was sweet.
4/25/2010 c1 9AmiiceeLokei
it was q.cute and sweet. :) just wonderfully simple. i think u shoul;d keep as oneshot.
9AmiiceeLokeiit was q.cute and sweet. :) just wonderfully simple. i think u shoul;d keep as oneshot.