for Curse Of the River Flower12/4/2010 c12 
20Demitria Miriam
rofl, I like that little bitty at the end that you wrote. Yay! Keyboard Sesshy! As for the rest of the chapter: I liked it lots! Aside from grammatical errors it was fun to read, I especially like the first scene where Sessh is confused by Inuyasha's inquiry in regards to his markings. Hahaha, slow Sesshou is slow. Hehe, good job! I look forward to more 8D
-DM
20Demitria Miriamrofl, I like that little bitty at the end that you wrote. Yay! Keyboard Sesshy! As for the rest of the chapter: I liked it lots! Aside from grammatical errors it was fun to read, I especially like the first scene where Sessh is confused by Inuyasha's inquiry in regards to his markings. Hahaha, slow Sesshou is slow. Hehe, good job! I look forward to more 8D
-DM
12/4/2010 c11 Demitria Miriam
lmfao! Oh my god. Epic. I love these lines:
"DIE GOD DAMN IT!", and
"...I want a bath. I feel like a booger demon"
"If it's any help, you look like one too"
Hahaha, funny. Good job! (hugstou!)
-DM
lmfao! Oh my god. Epic. I love these lines:
"DIE GOD DAMN IT!", and
"...I want a bath. I feel like a booger demon"
"If it's any help, you look like one too"
Hahaha, funny. Good job! (hugstou!)
-DM
10/24/2010 c10 1ardentes
I am sorry about all of the bad things happening to you one right after the other. Hopefully someone up there will cut you some slack. I like this story a lot! I do hope you update it! If there are more important things going on, then get those done first. And take care of yourself! Seriously, depression sucks and it can and will kill you if you don't get help! Again, I really liked this story! I think it's funny reading a story about Sesshomaru losing his powers and then discovering his attraction to Inuyasha. I really hope you can update soon!
1ardentesI am sorry about all of the bad things happening to you one right after the other. Hopefully someone up there will cut you some slack. I like this story a lot! I do hope you update it! If there are more important things going on, then get those done first. And take care of yourself! Seriously, depression sucks and it can and will kill you if you don't get help! Again, I really liked this story! I think it's funny reading a story about Sesshomaru losing his powers and then discovering his attraction to Inuyasha. I really hope you can update soon!
10/6/2010 c10 1Artistic Dragon
Hey Demonic Otaku hows things?
You may not reconise my name but I really need to tell you this. I am the Author of "Oh the Irony" and I am writing to tell you this...I can not update my fanfiction because my pc is broken and I will not be able to get one till after January. But worry not I will update as soon as I am able.
Here's hoping,
Artistic Dragon xxx
P.S The only reason I am able to tell you this is because I have nicked my friend's laptop momenterally.
1Artistic DragonHey Demonic Otaku hows things?
You may not reconise my name but I really need to tell you this. I am the Author of "Oh the Irony" and I am writing to tell you this...I can not update my fanfiction because my pc is broken and I will not be able to get one till after January. But worry not I will update as soon as I am able.
Here's hoping,
Artistic Dragon xxx
P.S The only reason I am able to tell you this is because I have nicked my friend's laptop momenterally.
8/1/2010 c10 9mochiusagi
nooooo sesshomaru! don't die! ummmmmm I really don't mean to offend you, but are you aware that there are some spelling mistakes? I wasn't sure if you didn't check or meant for it to spell it out the way it is currently spelled. Please update soon!
9mochiusaginooooo sesshomaru! don't die! ummmmmm I really don't mean to offend you, but are you aware that there are some spelling mistakes? I wasn't sure if you didn't check or meant for it to spell it out the way it is currently spelled. Please update soon!
7/30/2010 c8 5Shinosuke
okay. "compleat" is not a word. you mean "Complete".
And sadly this story is cheese-tastic i'm not sure i can stand it. XD
5Shinosukeokay. "compleat" is not a word. you mean "Complete".
And sadly this story is cheese-tastic i'm not sure i can stand it. XD
7/30/2010 c6 Shinosuke
ahahah. sorry for all the corrections, but i think it's sort of important.
"It had become quite, so quite that even Inuyasha diddn't hear them."
You mean 'quiet' not 'quite'. Quiet being the lack of sound. Quite meaning entirely or very.
ahahah. sorry for all the corrections, but i think it's sort of important.
"It had become quite, so quite that even Inuyasha diddn't hear them."
You mean 'quiet' not 'quite'. Quiet being the lack of sound. Quite meaning entirely or very.
7/30/2010 c5 Shinosuke
"Wither you think so or not, you do, and were coming with you wither you like it or not."
Wither means for something to die. You meant whether. XD
"Wither you think so or not, you do, and were coming with you wither you like it or not."
Wither means for something to die. You meant whether. XD
7/30/2010 c3 Shinosuke
in the beginning you meant "scent" as in a smell. not "sent". Sent means to send something. XD
in the beginning you meant "scent" as in a smell. not "sent". Sent means to send something. XD
7/30/2010 c2 Shinosuke
i'll be honest since you said this is your first fanfiction i think i'll try to offer some constructive criticism.
Firstly, your story is quite readable and not bad in anyway, so you should be proud.
But Inuyasha was acting a bit out of character in this chapter. If he dislikes his brother so much, it just doesn't make sense for him to be noticing the softness of his lips in that way. But there are of course ways you can achieve the same-ish affect while still keeping the brotherly hate intact.
You can have Inuyasha grudgingly admit that his brother is attractive and beautiful. but say something about how misleading it is. Like how can someone so terrible look that good. You know? Inuyasha may be honest enough to recognize beauty even when he hates his brother.
but for him to just be randomly thinking things about his beauty for no reason at all? Just seems a little odd.
Okay, i hope that was helpful to you. And not offensive, because that certainly wasn't my intent. I'll keep reading.
i'll be honest since you said this is your first fanfiction i think i'll try to offer some constructive criticism.
Firstly, your story is quite readable and not bad in anyway, so you should be proud.
But Inuyasha was acting a bit out of character in this chapter. If he dislikes his brother so much, it just doesn't make sense for him to be noticing the softness of his lips in that way. But there are of course ways you can achieve the same-ish affect while still keeping the brotherly hate intact.
You can have Inuyasha grudgingly admit that his brother is attractive and beautiful. but say something about how misleading it is. Like how can someone so terrible look that good. You know? Inuyasha may be honest enough to recognize beauty even when he hates his brother.
but for him to just be randomly thinking things about his beauty for no reason at all? Just seems a little odd.
Okay, i hope that was helpful to you. And not offensive, because that certainly wasn't my intent. I'll keep reading.
7/28/2010 c10 8Cherry Maiden
Nyah nyah! Dont worry too much on the story! Worry more on your health! ;_; I hope you get better! In fact i shall send magical beams of rainbow-y goodness to you and you shall be better! :3 I still love the update! You are doing amazing!
=^^=
8Cherry MaidenNyah nyah! Dont worry too much on the story! Worry more on your health! ;_; I hope you get better! In fact i shall send magical beams of rainbow-y goodness to you and you shall be better! :3 I still love the update! You are doing amazing!
=^^=
7/28/2010 c10 Kurina333
NO JKJKJKLOLOLOL I heart your fing make Oh My God I love your hair!
Haha... but Seriously, I hope you feel better soon. My Dad died about a month ago and he had a really bad cough. He never went to the hospital though. Lucky you. I wish you the best of luck and hope you make a full recovery. Oh yes and PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON OR SNEEZING WITH YOUR EYES OPEN WILL BE THE LEAST OF YOUR WORRIES! 333 JK
...Sorry bout that... I'm in a strange mood.
~K
NO JKJKJKLOLOLOL I heart your fing make Oh My God I love your hair!
Haha... but Seriously, I hope you feel better soon. My Dad died about a month ago and he had a really bad cough. He never went to the hospital though. Lucky you. I wish you the best of luck and hope you make a full recovery. Oh yes and PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON OR SNEEZING WITH YOUR EYES OPEN WILL BE THE LEAST OF YOUR WORRIES! 333 JK
...Sorry bout that... I'm in a strange mood.
~K
7/28/2010 c10 11Kasia-chan
Oh my god! I hope Inuyasha will rescue him in time. :)
I liked this chapter and I'll be eagerly waiting for more!
11Kasia-chanOh my god! I hope Inuyasha will rescue him in time. :)
I liked this chapter and I'll be eagerly waiting for more!
7/28/2010 c10 6FanOfAction
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dang this cliffhanger! i must know what happens to sesshy! update fast fast fast
6FanOfActionahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dang this cliffhanger! i must know what happens to sesshy! update fast fast fast