4/3/2018 c21 Wolf'sVine
Oh, and, uh, sorry if any of my reviews are insensitive to your grief cuz... I don't mean to be. I hope you're doing well.
Oh, and, uh, sorry if any of my reviews are insensitive to your grief cuz... I don't mean to be. I hope you're doing well.
4/3/2018 c21 Wolf'sVine
Um, so... I hope that one day you'll be inspired enough to keep writing this fic cuz I've had a great time reading it! I adore that Sesshomaru is so much more relaxed, well, around Inuyasha and his friends, that is. Of course, he's terrified of Naraku and that disgusting psycho Kamavirya! And, oddly enough, I like the way you've written Naraku. He's a devious, underhanded badass and really scary in this fic, but it seems like he has some, minuscule amount, of integrity. I didn't expect to like Naraku cuz... he's a complete villain! But, I did and I'm a bit peeved that I did end up liking him, even if it's just a teeny-tiny bit! I hope Sesshomaru escapes soon! or Inuyasha saves him! Oh, by the way, why is Inuyasha running around with his youkai markings and red eyes? I mean, yeah, I know he's seriously pissed and worried, but... doesn't that mean his inner youki has taken control or something? Really, this is a great and really damn interesting fic, so I hope that, one day, you'll write more chapters.
Um, so... I hope that one day you'll be inspired enough to keep writing this fic cuz I've had a great time reading it! I adore that Sesshomaru is so much more relaxed, well, around Inuyasha and his friends, that is. Of course, he's terrified of Naraku and that disgusting psycho Kamavirya! And, oddly enough, I like the way you've written Naraku. He's a devious, underhanded badass and really scary in this fic, but it seems like he has some, minuscule amount, of integrity. I didn't expect to like Naraku cuz... he's a complete villain! But, I did and I'm a bit peeved that I did end up liking him, even if it's just a teeny-tiny bit! I hope Sesshomaru escapes soon! or Inuyasha saves him! Oh, by the way, why is Inuyasha running around with his youkai markings and red eyes? I mean, yeah, I know he's seriously pissed and worried, but... doesn't that mean his inner youki has taken control or something? Really, this is a great and really damn interesting fic, so I hope that, one day, you'll write more chapters.
12/27/2017 c21 33Gayle Nightingale
I’m sad for you and your family. Cancer is horrible. I like your story and wonder how you plan to end it.
I’m sad for you and your family. Cancer is horrible. I like your story and wonder how you plan to end it.
5/29/2017 c21 Wolf'sVine
So, even though it's been a year, I hope you're okay. Now, onto this incredibly delicious fic... please, update, please?! I wanna know if Sesshomaru manages to escape, if Inuyasha will keep up his frenetic speed if he scents Sesshomaru nearby again and if Kagome will ever figure out why she's jealous of Inuyasha's intense reaction to Sesshomaru being kidnapped. Also, I wanna know what Naraku's up to and if Sesshomaru will get the nerve to run. Please, for the love of supernaturally wonderful fics!, don't leave me in suspense! I'm craving so hard right now for the next chapter that I can almost taste it! Okay, slight over-exaggeration, but, believe it or not, not too much of one. I really do want to keep reading this fabulous fic!
So, even though it's been a year, I hope you're okay. Now, onto this incredibly delicious fic... please, update, please?! I wanna know if Sesshomaru manages to escape, if Inuyasha will keep up his frenetic speed if he scents Sesshomaru nearby again and if Kagome will ever figure out why she's jealous of Inuyasha's intense reaction to Sesshomaru being kidnapped. Also, I wanna know what Naraku's up to and if Sesshomaru will get the nerve to run. Please, for the love of supernaturally wonderful fics!, don't leave me in suspense! I'm craving so hard right now for the next chapter that I can almost taste it! Okay, slight over-exaggeration, but, believe it or not, not too much of one. I really do want to keep reading this fabulous fic!
5/27/2016 c21 Selkis
I'm sorry...
I'm sorry...
5/25/2016 c21 Guest
That's alright you take your time. So sorry about your uncle! Life is horrible now these days. Not to long ago did my moms old friend lost her life insurance. She passed away. Well she was breathing only through machines ... But still. If you need a friend to talk to. I'm here for you :3 you may not know me but know this I'm a very sensitive person / I have a huge heart 0.o my parents say. I don't like to see others sad. So please feel fell free to tell me if you want to :3
That's alright you take your time. So sorry about your uncle! Life is horrible now these days. Not to long ago did my moms old friend lost her life insurance. She passed away. Well she was breathing only through machines ... But still. If you need a friend to talk to. I'm here for you :3 you may not know me but know this I'm a very sensitive person / I have a huge heart 0.o my parents say. I don't like to see others sad. So please feel fell free to tell me if you want to :3
5/20/2016 c21 Guest
We know dear, our beloved ones come first. A big hug to you and you family.
We know dear, our beloved ones come first. A big hug to you and you family.
5/20/2016 c21 2VampireDoll666
No need to say sorry, your family is more important than a story...you and your family is in my prayers.
No need to say sorry, your family is more important than a story...you and your family is in my prayers.
5/20/2016 c21 2ankwhat
Sorry for your lose. Take all the time you need. I'm sure your readers understand and will be waiting.
Sorry for your lose. Take all the time you need. I'm sure your readers understand and will be waiting.
5/19/2016 c20 Guest
Glad no writer's notes at the beginning. The characters especially Sesshamaru seem like teenagers. He has the most maturity of the all. He is so far out of character is unbelievable. Rin has shown at times to be more mature than kagome. So the un ending crying don't fit. She is being raised by a high class demon of noble blood. Well kagome is an all time selfish idiot as usual.
Glad no writer's notes at the beginning. The characters especially Sesshamaru seem like teenagers. He has the most maturity of the all. He is so far out of character is unbelievable. Rin has shown at times to be more mature than kagome. So the un ending crying don't fit. She is being raised by a high class demon of noble blood. Well kagome is an all time selfish idiot as usual.
5/18/2016 c11 Uwohali
Decent story. Leave out the side commentary it lends nothing to the story. Also you may want to proof read earlier chapters & correct spelling errors. Those things do distract from the story. You said this was a learning experience I think. Concentrate on the story write for your own personal enjoyment 1st. Those who dislike story is not forced to read it.
Decent story. Leave out the side commentary it lends nothing to the story. Also you may want to proof read earlier chapters & correct spelling errors. Those things do distract from the story. You said this was a learning experience I think. Concentrate on the story write for your own personal enjoyment 1st. Those who dislike story is not forced to read it.
5/18/2016 c9 Uwohali
on a side note: It was 2-3 weeks before anyone decided to take you to hospital? What was ur family thinking Saving money while you suffer? You could have died! Glad your ok now, I hope.
on a side note: It was 2-3 weeks before anyone decided to take you to hospital? What was ur family thinking Saving money while you suffer? You could have died! Glad your ok now, I hope.