for Another Thing to Thank For10/14/2011 c1 
15kimbari
You can't have too many stories about this subject... Or Avatar for that matter. Well done.
15kimbariYou can't have too many stories about this subject... Or Avatar for that matter. Well done.
9/27/2010 c1 28broadhands
Shows a light, delicate touch for the characters. Nice treatment - you should write more. Practice makes perfect.
28broadhandsShows a light, delicate touch for the characters. Nice treatment - you should write more. Practice makes perfect.
8/11/2010 c1 c2ruis
i always wonder if she ever told him about that night i think you hit it on the money good story
i always wonder if she ever told him about that night i think you hit it on the money good story
6/12/2010 c1 dan
Great story, thanks for writting it.
Great story, thanks for writting it.
5/2/2010 c1 MeakoXIII
That was your first time writing in English? I couldn't tell. It was a good story with believable reactions from both Jake and Neytiri. I liked it :)
That was your first time writing in English? I couldn't tell. It was a good story with believable reactions from both Jake and Neytiri. I liked it :)
4/30/2010 c1 3SGT.CJC
Wow great short! And a rather good attempt if I may say so. You have proven braver than I thus far as I may no write anything 'till after my exams are finished (two months away) And I'm slow at writing on a good day.
All in all very well done. Especially for a first attempt in English (some say it is the hardest). I see no spelling mistakes or anything of the sort so as I say, Very very well done.
You captured the characters well and had the emotions well described. My hat comes off to you. 10/10 two thumbs up and a great big cheesy smile.
Oel ngati kame (I see you)(in Na'vi)
3SGT.CJCWow great short! And a rather good attempt if I may say so. You have proven braver than I thus far as I may no write anything 'till after my exams are finished (two months away) And I'm slow at writing on a good day.
All in all very well done. Especially for a first attempt in English (some say it is the hardest). I see no spelling mistakes or anything of the sort so as I say, Very very well done.
You captured the characters well and had the emotions well described. My hat comes off to you. 10/10 two thumbs up and a great big cheesy smile.
Oel ngati kame (I see you)(in Na'vi)
4/29/2010 c1 15Limxuxu09
Hello! I love your work! I think you were able to capture Jake's and Neytiri's personality... Keep it up! :)
15Limxuxu09Hello! I love your work! I think you were able to capture Jake's and Neytiri's personality... Keep it up! :)
4/28/2010 c1 6JustAGirl24
Really nice little read, I never would have guessed English was your second language! You did a great job exploring the characters' feelings given the circumstances. Keep up the great work!
6JustAGirl24Really nice little read, I never would have guessed English was your second language! You did a great job exploring the characters' feelings given the circumstances. Keep up the great work!
4/28/2010 c1 Kirajenlove
I really liked this! Short and sweet! I also like Jake/Neytiri shipper fics!
I also would never have been able to tell that you weren't a native speaker of English. You did very well!
I really liked this! Short and sweet! I also like Jake/Neytiri shipper fics!
I also would never have been able to tell that you weren't a native speaker of English. You did very well!
4/25/2010 c1 Codeless Enigma
Excellent, your English rivals that of many native speakers, myself included.
Excellent, your English rivals that of many native speakers, myself included.
4/25/2010 c1 Don't Call Me Jenny
I never would have known that you weren't a native english speaker if you hadn't said anything. Your writing was excellent. Sweet story, I liked it.
I never would have known that you weren't a native english speaker if you hadn't said anything. Your writing was excellent. Sweet story, I liked it.
4/25/2010 c1 1Jarvey
Well done! You carried the voices of the characters well, and the dialogue flowed smoothly.
1JarveyWell done! You carried the voices of the characters well, and the dialogue flowed smoothly.
4/25/2010 c1 7Jack Hawthorne
He-hey! I'd say this is brilliant for a first try. :P Not only is your grammar far better than I would expect from a first-timer, the story itself is rather good too. I don't think I've read any story that simalar either, so you get even more plus-points for originality. ^^
All in all, a very enjoyable read. ^^
7Jack HawthorneHe-hey! I'd say this is brilliant for a first try. :P Not only is your grammar far better than I would expect from a first-timer, the story itself is rather good too. I don't think I've read any story that simalar either, so you get even more plus-points for originality. ^^
All in all, a very enjoyable read. ^^