for A Downed Dragon is a Dead Dragon12/20/2020 c3 Asilrettor
Thank you, I always say that the easiest way to capture hiccup is to take his leg away. This is only the second fic ive read where that’s happened
Thank you, I always say that the easiest way to capture hiccup is to take his leg away. This is only the second fic ive read where that’s happened
9/16/2020 c25 JustMikey
I really enjoyed this. Especially with the fact that you made this before any continuation was out. It was such a good story and really well written. Great job.
A bit if constructive criticism/personal notes: you had great descriptions, but fell short in some spots. Your original dragon was so interesting, but I kind of had a mini Dragon Queen mixed with a whispering death in my head, and I'm not sure that's what you were going for. Adding just a bit more detail would go a long way - what kind of jaw it had, were its teeth out like a Nightmare or Gronkle, or were they in like a Terror or Nightfury, were it's eyes on the side or front of the head, did the eyes slit when angry or narrow - small details that can just make the picture pop.
Again, great story. I lived it in its entirety. Wonderful job. I look forward to seeing more.
I really enjoyed this. Especially with the fact that you made this before any continuation was out. It was such a good story and really well written. Great job.
A bit if constructive criticism/personal notes: you had great descriptions, but fell short in some spots. Your original dragon was so interesting, but I kind of had a mini Dragon Queen mixed with a whispering death in my head, and I'm not sure that's what you were going for. Adding just a bit more detail would go a long way - what kind of jaw it had, were its teeth out like a Nightmare or Gronkle, or were they in like a Terror or Nightfury, were it's eyes on the side or front of the head, did the eyes slit when angry or narrow - small details that can just make the picture pop.
Again, great story. I lived it in its entirety. Wonderful job. I look forward to seeing more.
5/20/2019 c25 
84PrinRue
What a wild ride! Such a captivating story! I totally didn't binge read it in like 4 hours. Totally.
I like it when writers use these two's disabilities against them, as sadistic as that sounds, haha. The war was very thrilling, and your flight scenes were so vivid I could clearly see it all! Get a fave from me :D
84PrinRueWhat a wild ride! Such a captivating story! I totally didn't binge read it in like 4 hours. Totally.
I like it when writers use these two's disabilities against them, as sadistic as that sounds, haha. The war was very thrilling, and your flight scenes were so vivid I could clearly see it all! Get a fave from me :D
2/6/2019 c25 48Darkflame's Pyre
Thank you for writing this! In the words of Hiccup; 'This is AMAZING!' Off to see if you've written anything else now!
48Darkflame's PyreThank you for writing this! In the words of Hiccup; 'This is AMAZING!' Off to see if you've written anything else now!
9/24/2018 c13 Lord IronFox
Hi there, dont know if youll see this anytime soon, but i would at one time agree with your assessment of the name Alvin. That is until the Dragons series. Now half the time when i hear Alvin im thinking okay is he more joker, skywalker, or that guy from metalacolypse.
But, i am enjoying your story so far. It is an intriguing concept. Good work.
Hi there, dont know if youll see this anytime soon, but i would at one time agree with your assessment of the name Alvin. That is until the Dragons series. Now half the time when i hear Alvin im thinking okay is he more joker, skywalker, or that guy from metalacolypse.
But, i am enjoying your story so far. It is an intriguing concept. Good work.
6/8/2018 c16 waytooobsessed
This story really follows HTTYD2... Hiccup makes a mistake going against what his father said, causes a war. Cool that you came up with that theme years before that movie came out!
This story really follows HTTYD2... Hiccup makes a mistake going against what his father said, causes a war. Cool that you came up with that theme years before that movie came out!
2/19/2018 c17 Guest
OH GOD NOOOOO
YOU NEVER USE BOOKS LIKE THAT FOR THIS CRAP
NAMES:
RUFFNUT&TUFFNUT BARF&BELCH ZIPPLEBACK
HICCUPTOOTHLESS NIGHTFURY
ASTRID STORMFLY DEADLY NADDER
FISHLEGS MEATLUG GRONKLE
SNOTLOUT HOOKFANG MONSTROUS NIGHTMARE
if you watched the series and decided to use it there are others, too
DAGGUR THE DERANGED I FORGOT THE NAME TRIPLE STRIKE he is a good guy at that point and changed his ways
HEATHER WINDSHEAR RAZORWHIP
GUSTAV FANGHOOK MONSRTOUS NIGHTMARE
STOIK SKULL CRUSHER RUMBLEHORN
OH GOD NOOOOO
YOU NEVER USE BOOKS LIKE THAT FOR THIS CRAP
NAMES:
RUFFNUT&TUFFNUT BARF&BELCH ZIPPLEBACK
HICCUPTOOTHLESS NIGHTFURY
ASTRID STORMFLY DEADLY NADDER
FISHLEGS MEATLUG GRONKLE
SNOTLOUT HOOKFANG MONSTROUS NIGHTMARE
if you watched the series and decided to use it there are others, too
DAGGUR THE DERANGED I FORGOT THE NAME TRIPLE STRIKE he is a good guy at that point and changed his ways
HEATHER WINDSHEAR RAZORWHIP
GUSTAV FANGHOOK MONSRTOUS NIGHTMARE
STOIK SKULL CRUSHER RUMBLEHORN
9/1/2017 c25 3Zamara27
This is a Phenomenal story! I read it all in a night, I just couldn't put it down! The only thing I don't like about it is the struggle I will face in finding one equally as good. Great job and fantastic writing!
3Zamara27This is a Phenomenal story! I read it all in a night, I just couldn't put it down! The only thing I don't like about it is the struggle I will face in finding one equally as good. Great job and fantastic writing!
1/30/2017 c25 10CosmicEssence
This is a great fic, excellent toothless and hiccup, both separate and together interaction. The support and imagery during this final chapter as well as during their walk to the Dornars great hall are 2 of my favourite for this fic. The mention of Hiccup sleeping through to Spring again! and the image of Toothless acting as a bed restrainer :D Excellent characterization of everyone, good use of dragons and Vikings and just the general plotline...loved it! Thank you for posting and finishing!
10CosmicEssenceThis is a great fic, excellent toothless and hiccup, both separate and together interaction. The support and imagery during this final chapter as well as during their walk to the Dornars great hall are 2 of my favourite for this fic. The mention of Hiccup sleeping through to Spring again! and the image of Toothless acting as a bed restrainer :D Excellent characterization of everyone, good use of dragons and Vikings and just the general plotline...loved it! Thank you for posting and finishing!
9/11/2016 c25 FreakyFido
I've been waiting to finish this fic to post a review, and now that I have finished, it's kind of bittersweet. I was quite surprised to see that the story was completed 6 years ago.
I read it all in one go, and live for your characterization. Hiccup's naïvety cut off just soon enough to make it real, and you didn't turn Astrid into a hulking mass of rage or a sweet, timid housemaid like mist fanfictio a I've read in this fandom. You write excellent battle scenes and I hope to read more content like this from you.
Ta!
I've been waiting to finish this fic to post a review, and now that I have finished, it's kind of bittersweet. I was quite surprised to see that the story was completed 6 years ago.
I read it all in one go, and live for your characterization. Hiccup's naïvety cut off just soon enough to make it real, and you didn't turn Astrid into a hulking mass of rage or a sweet, timid housemaid like mist fanfictio a I've read in this fandom. You write excellent battle scenes and I hope to read more content like this from you.
Ta!