
9/16/2016 c2 Silverleaf8816
Please continue!
Please continue!
3/21/2011 c2
9Raephaim
its good. i like it. i wouldve liked it more if the story were longer hint hint wink wink

its good. i like it. i wouldve liked it more if the story were longer hint hint wink wink
11/23/2010 c1
16Thoughts Of A Shadow
Alright, pep talk to get you going, since i KNOW you're not that busy at school...
YOU NEED TO UPDATE!
This is on my favorite authors list and my alert list, and dang it, I expect people on there to update! You've got a great story going here, don't give up!
But then, you already said you had four chapters...
So please post them...
I'm anxious!
-Shadow
(Hopefully this convinced you to come back!)

Alright, pep talk to get you going, since i KNOW you're not that busy at school...
YOU NEED TO UPDATE!
This is on my favorite authors list and my alert list, and dang it, I expect people on there to update! You've got a great story going here, don't give up!
But then, you already said you had four chapters...
So please post them...
I'm anxious!
-Shadow
(Hopefully this convinced you to come back!)
6/1/2010 c2
35blue-eyed-cow
This is great! I love it! Can't wait to see what will happen to Iggy (he's my favorite! ;) )
There aren't too many great prequels out there, but this is really awesome! Please update soon!
~blue-eyed-cow

This is great! I love it! Can't wait to see what will happen to Iggy (he's my favorite! ;) )
There aren't too many great prequels out there, but this is really awesome! Please update soon!
~blue-eyed-cow
5/10/2010 c2 GoddessSumizofVenus
you shouldnt quit ^^ you totally got max's attitude down too XD and this story i can actually read because the others hav ooc's or just plots i do not like..so please dont give please update soon!
you shouldnt quit ^^ you totally got max's attitude down too XD and this story i can actually read because the others hav ooc's or just plots i do not like..so please dont give please update soon!
5/5/2010 c2
16Thoughts Of A Shadow
woah there maxmeb. no reason to stop the story just cause the FIRST chapter of your FIRST story wasn't what you expected it to be. Most of us here (i can't speak for all of us) are still beginners who are asking other people
s opinions to help us become better writers...
SO DON'T GIVE THIS UP!
TOAS

woah there maxmeb. no reason to stop the story just cause the FIRST chapter of your FIRST story wasn't what you expected it to be. Most of us here (i can't speak for all of us) are still beginners who are asking other people
s opinions to help us become better writers...
SO DON'T GIVE THIS UP!
TOAS
5/3/2010 c1
1MarleighKitty
Great Story, Dont stop! Keep at it, you got a good thing going in this story. Please Update Soon! Cant wait

Great Story, Dont stop! Keep at it, you got a good thing going in this story. Please Update Soon! Cant wait