
4/28/2010 c1
68lil-miss-chocolate
Not a bad beginning, but please, find a beta. I'm quite happy to do it if you want me to. Poor spelling makes it quite difficult to read. Message me if you'd like me to.

Not a bad beginning, but please, find a beta. I'm quite happy to do it if you want me to. Poor spelling makes it quite difficult to read. Message me if you'd like me to.
4/28/2010 c1 Ellrie
GIVE ME MORE! no but it was a really great begining and I can't wait for an other chapter, do u have it done or was this a onesjot... please be more please :p
GIVE ME MORE! no but it was a really great begining and I can't wait for an other chapter, do u have it done or was this a onesjot... please be more please :p