
3/9/2015 c1
5Shana-Fujioka
Kaito working as a waiter must be a fine look. :3 It's a pity, that Shinichi didn't recognize Kaito's voice. But it was still a cute story.

Kaito working as a waiter must be a fine look. :3 It's a pity, that Shinichi didn't recognize Kaito's voice. But it was still a cute story.
1/3/2013 c1
9raziella
aw, that was really sweet. I wonder if Shinichi is subconsciously aware it was Kid (because I'm assuming it was ;) ) that came to him. I loved the ending, Kaito's confidence and Shinichi's way of dealing with the flamboyancy of Kaito. Thanks for sharing!

aw, that was really sweet. I wonder if Shinichi is subconsciously aware it was Kid (because I'm assuming it was ;) ) that came to him. I loved the ending, Kaito's confidence and Shinichi's way of dealing with the flamboyancy of Kaito. Thanks for sharing!
6/2/2012 c1 MUHAHAHA
Wow! I really like this os!
And I like that 'i-dont-reget'-attribut of Shinichi.
But there is one question in my head: Had Kaito allway worked in this shop or later when Shinichi got hospitalized?
Well, thanks for writting such a nice story!
Wow! I really like this os!
And I like that 'i-dont-reget'-attribut of Shinichi.
But there is one question in my head: Had Kaito allway worked in this shop or later when Shinichi got hospitalized?
Well, thanks for writting such a nice story!
11/5/2011 c1
3DayDreaming0f y0u
I so want you to continue until Shinichi realizes that it was Kaito who had spoken to him! Please, Please, please! This is really great! I like the chemistry they have going on right now. And Ran. Whoa. She didn't give up without a fight, not that I didn't expect her to.

I so want you to continue until Shinichi realizes that it was Kaito who had spoken to him! Please, Please, please! This is really great! I like the chemistry they have going on right now. And Ran. Whoa. She didn't give up without a fight, not that I didn't expect her to.
9/20/2011 c1
3TangerineTea
Oh, that's just too sweet for words. _ I love your KaiShin pieces (good for me that it's your favorite pairing!). I'm sorry to see that this is only a one-shot, though. The premise is sound, and I'd love to see more of this cafe (and Kaito hanging all over Shinichi, that too. Well, okay, mostly that. XD), and Shinichi finding peace and his place in the world. It sounds like it would make a good longer story.
Just one thing, though-at the end, instead of "cliche", I think what you meant to write was "original character", or "OC". An original character isn't necessarily a cliche, and there's a lot more to cliches than just original characters. I just thought you might like to know. ^^ Please keep writing!

Oh, that's just too sweet for words. _ I love your KaiShin pieces (good for me that it's your favorite pairing!). I'm sorry to see that this is only a one-shot, though. The premise is sound, and I'd love to see more of this cafe (and Kaito hanging all over Shinichi, that too. Well, okay, mostly that. XD), and Shinichi finding peace and his place in the world. It sounds like it would make a good longer story.
Just one thing, though-at the end, instead of "cliche", I think what you meant to write was "original character", or "OC". An original character isn't necessarily a cliche, and there's a lot more to cliches than just original characters. I just thought you might like to know. ^^ Please keep writing!
8/4/2010 c1 LuckyCleric
Loved it! I think it would actually be good if after you managed to finish Raven, Tantei-kun? you wrote a sequel to this!
Loved it! I think it would actually be good if after you managed to finish Raven, Tantei-kun? you wrote a sequel to this!
7/4/2010 c1
12kuroange1
XD yay! I'm happy as long as there's kaishin. The interactions were nice, and good job!
so floral delights won't be updated for awhile huh? Awwwww...

XD yay! I'm happy as long as there's kaishin. The interactions were nice, and good job!
so floral delights won't be updated for awhile huh? Awwwww...
5/30/2010 c1
5tsuanyue
Awww. Too bad it's a oneshot. The KaiShin undertones were adorable and I'm glad to hear Shinichi being selfish for once. The angst puppy needs it.

Awww. Too bad it's a oneshot. The KaiShin undertones were adorable and I'm glad to hear Shinichi being selfish for once. The angst puppy needs it.
5/2/2010 c1
11JustTeahPlease
Reading the story I kept thinking 'is this a spur of the moment thing or several days old?' cuz that would be too coincidental and much too creepy ^^; And then I reached your author's notes XD
I know it's sadistic, but I'm really pleased about the break-up scene. And Kaito of course. Subtle as firework, yeah right Shin-chan. Anyway, the story has a relaxed, nice atmosphere to it really like it ^^

Reading the story I kept thinking 'is this a spur of the moment thing or several days old?' cuz that would be too coincidental and much too creepy ^^; And then I reached your author's notes XD
I know it's sadistic, but I'm really pleased about the break-up scene. And Kaito of course. Subtle as firework, yeah right Shin-chan. Anyway, the story has a relaxed, nice atmosphere to it really like it ^^