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5/7/2010 c1 rubeanddodo
How wonderful you are writing more! A treat for us all. A very fascinating start to a story that I'm sure will develop into a real keeper. And a real tear jerker as my heart strings are already zinging! Ha ha doll, now you have the hell of trying to update on a regular basis. I'm sure you will do a sterling job because I will be nagging you.
5/7/2010 c1 bluesneak
I think you're off to a good start. The first story is always the hardest, and the more you write the more you'll get in stride.

There were a couple of lines I really liked:

"The room was empty but obviously tended to, for the curtains were drawn and there were fresh flowers on the center of the table that decorated the room. There was not a speck of dust anywhere to be seen. Everything still running smoothly I see, doesn't anything bother this woman?"

and:

"He looked much better than he did when he had left so she sadly thought being away from me has been good for him."
5/6/2010 c1 2Sakuralux
This is a very promising beginning! And shame on Rhett for being so critical of Scarlett's mothering abilities right in front of Ella. I am looking forward to seeing where you take this!
5/4/2010 c1 56PrincessAlica
very nice beginning, sorry that I didn't review sooner. It is finals week and I had a paper due. But I am certainly looking forward to more of this :)
5/3/2010 c1 17shaniatwains
This is actually the first S&R story I've read in a couple of months!
I've been so busy with school to read anything :/ but I'm glad you
told me about it on facebook ;D even though I have to get up really
early in the morning (field trip) there's no way I wouldve missed this!
:) reading it made me miss them so much, and it also brought the anger
back because they're both way too stubborn, lol. Great job CeeJay! :D
5/3/2010 c1 2CCgwtw
I'm glad to see you have the writing bug again. It was a good effort. I'm hoping that the title, "Luck of the Irish," implies that loving Rhett will not be Scarlett's misfortune this time around. That said, I'm looking forward to more and a happy reunion for the pair.
5/2/2010 c1 missussassy
can not wait for 2nd chapter
5/2/2010 c1 5iris fibonacci
I really like this! You packed a lot of details and emotion into a relatively short chapter, and set up a powerful conflict ripe for a (happy) resolution. This was such a great line: *She wanted to get him a pocket watch to show that he was now the man of the house.* It really shows how Scarlett has come to value her children.

And then this: *Rhett never thought that coming back to Atlanta to keep up appearances would be easy but somehow he hadn't bargained for it to be quite so difficult with not only having to face Scarlett again for the first time sinceafter his departure but also the memories that came with being back in this mausoleum which housed so many painful memories.* So we know they have much to work through. You've given us very telling glimpses into both of their thoughts.

Well done, ma chatte noire! Looking forward to reading much more.
5/2/2010 c1 3isolabella
And you've caught the writing bug in earnest! See, it was only a matter of time! :) It will be interesting to see how this story develops. Thanks for writing-and sharing-it.
5/2/2010 c1 24Iva1201
I have enjoyed, and I do kindly review as asked. (-: I liked it how he arrived not announced, I felt it very much like him. And I am very happy you included the children a realistic way because many less skilled authors bury their stories for me when not handling this issue right. (-:

I have noticed that other reviewers already pointed out some miss-spellings, but I (for whatever reason (-:) had also my eyes open for them in your piece, so here one more correction:

...while in Rhett's arms telling him Rhett about everything that he had missed,... him or Rhett, not both (-:
5/2/2010 c1 18CaptScarlett
If he wanted to keep her at arm's length he should have been civil, not gone and provoked her like that, nasty man. Old habits die hard I suppose.
Maybe your feelings about Scarlett aren't as under control as you'd like to think Rhett Butler. Beware!
I'm interested to see where this leads. [Will there be smut there? ;)]

Also, get your white out back out CJ, there's an extra 's' in Wades's. :)
5/2/2010 c1 7Scarlett Jaimie
Oh, you finally took the plunge. Well done! Very brave of you. Can't wait to see what storylines will be ahead; now you can execute all those fantasies you have been telling us about all this time! ;-)

And, oh, I noticed a couple of boo-boohs:

'Yes he was much better then the day that he had left'

'to face Scarlett again for the first time sinceafter his departure'

Tsk, tsk, CeeJay, you of all people... ;-)
Nah, I know how easily you can overlook little mistakes like that when you are so busy trying to translate your ideas into a story.

I hope you had fun being a writer, I sure had fun being your reader!
5/2/2010 c1 11scaryand damaged
that was very good. now since i reviewed will you reward me with a fast update?
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