for Red Roses in a Crater1/31/2011 c1 
117Rosawyn
That was really good. I guess it's a little frustrating to the reader that it isn't revealed who Faith is remembering, but that is so in her character.
Also, maybe they got the flowers from some nearby...garden or something. Somewhere outside the crater, y'know.
Principal um, what was his name again? He's one person who I would have liked added here. Maybe he could give a rose for all the kids who died while he was principal at Sunnydale High.
117RosawynThat was really good. I guess it's a little frustrating to the reader that it isn't revealed who Faith is remembering, but that is so in her character.
Also, maybe they got the flowers from some nearby...garden or something. Somewhere outside the crater, y'know.
Principal um, what was his name again? He's one person who I would have liked added here. Maybe he could give a rose for all the kids who died while he was principal at Sunnydale High.
1/21/2011 c1 z5caARL52L3
This was beautiful. It really was. It almost brought tears to my eyes, reading it. I especially loved how we could all make our own guesses about who Faith's rose was for.
This was beautiful. It really was. It almost brought tears to my eyes, reading it. I especially loved how we could all make our own guesses about who Faith's rose was for.
8/31/2010 c1 5Bliss714
Wow. That's beautiful. I'm having a hard time seeing the keys through my tears. Wow.
5Bliss714Wow. That's beautiful. I'm having a hard time seeing the keys through my tears. Wow.
7/27/2010 c1 Spurlunk
WOW. Just...wow. This was absolutely fantastic. I loved it. The emotion was amazing and it just felt so...RIGHT. I just - it was awesome. Simply awesome. The only tiny thing I might add is a bit more specific examples of things that they'd miss about each person. Other than that though, again, I say WOW. This is amazing.
WOW. Just...wow. This was absolutely fantastic. I loved it. The emotion was amazing and it just felt so...RIGHT. I just - it was awesome. Simply awesome. The only tiny thing I might add is a bit more specific examples of things that they'd miss about each person. Other than that though, again, I say WOW. This is amazing.
6/24/2010 c1 8marylinevelyn
I love the way you said that Spike was the one who was never supposed to leave, because I think that's the hardest part of the goodbye.
8marylinevelynI love the way you said that Spike was the one who was never supposed to leave, because I think that's the hardest part of the goodbye.
5/6/2010 c1 5Indigo1100
Oh, my. Beautiful and heartbreaking all at once. Wonderfully depicted very special moment. Thanks.
5Indigo1100Oh, my. Beautiful and heartbreaking all at once. Wonderfully depicted very special moment. Thanks.
5/2/2010 c1 69Music of the wind
Wow! this is so sad! It kind of reminds me of the end of the movie Rose Red. You are a great writer. Keep writing
69Music of the windWow! this is so sad! It kind of reminds me of the end of the movie Rose Red. You are a great writer. Keep writing