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7/10/2012 c9 6One Over Infinity
ha. now was it Miranda or EDI I wonder? There wasn't any obvious emotional turnaround where Shepard decided that she was still willing to try again, despite the fact that (she thought) he had moved on... So I just have to assume that it was one of them.

Whatever the case, this was certainly a good story, though I think I personally preferred 'Breathe.' That's just IMHO though...

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12/14/2011 c9 xx Twilight Princess xx
Love your story. :)

Please update soon.
10/14/2011 c4 2PinkSunset925
Ahahaha! I love your AN at the end. I thought the same thing when I saw her! :D. I loved this chapter. You truly have a gift. Can't wait to so what more is in store...
10/14/2011 c2 PinkSunset925
Amazing story so far... I love that song What Hurts The Most but I never have seen the music video. So just when I finished this chapter I went on youtube and searched the video. IT WAS SO SAD! I cried! Then I clicked on Avril Lavigne "When I'm Gone" And I started sobbing! Wow now I'm getting way off of topic. Great start. I can't wait to read more once I stop crying...
1/11/2011 c9 2Commander Kurt
I really feel for them both, and good call by Serena to send the e-mail anyway. Keeping my fingers crossed for more chapters when the muse strikes you.
1/6/2011 c9 veetvont
Yay! I love this story! I am a recent Shenko convert, and this really was great! Hope to see more soon!
12/23/2010 c9 jecica
You're a brilliant writer, more please!
11/24/2010 c9 2LillyWhiteRosePetals
everytime i read one of your chapters i want to go place ME again!

Thanks for updating, please keep them coming.
11/23/2010 c9 Jenna53
Glad you're back. Good chapter. Thanks.
11/22/2010 c9 25sesheta255
Kassy that was worth the wait. Nice chapter. I felt both Kaidan's and Serena's pain.
9/18/2010 c8 12quantumparadigm
Moar please? :D

I loved the dream sequence in this chapter! I could almost envision it in my mind, as if it were playing in a movie or something. And my inner Kaidan voice whispered "you betrayed me" and sent shivers up my spine.

My heart aches for both Serena and Kaidan. I love your depiction of Kaidan and his thought process as he stands in front of Hackett and Anderson, trying to figure out where he stood.
9/9/2010 c8 9Jennalee116
Another wonderful chapter! I love how Hackett and Anderson wanted to help Shephard so much!

Kaidan is such a sweetie in your story - now for some heavy duty groveling!
9/1/2010 c8 Aileo
I really do like this story. Your Kaidan and Shepard are really very wonderful.
8/31/2010 c8 1KermitTheHermit
Love! Can Kaidan get any sweeter, keeping her picture in his helmet. I want more please =]
8/31/2010 c8 4Nightodie
Kass- I love it! The feelings, the other stuff! It's wonderful!

Thank you!
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