11/6/2018 c5 Guest
I had a lot of fun reading this.
I had a lot of fun reading this.
7/11/2015 c2 7Siontix
Again, I don't know too much about either show; but I actually do know about the powers both characters have and find it interesting that they are, indeed, very similar.
Again, I don't know too much about either show; but I actually do know about the powers both characters have and find it interesting that they are, indeed, very similar.
7/8/2015 c1 Siontix
I know this is from almost 6 years back, but this concept is interesting all the same. As a kid I hated Inuyasha (because I lived a period of my life hating anime) and couldn't understand Naruto; but I'd say nowadays I have a cordial view of both series.
These two characters make for a good crossover, just like Mario and Sonic.
I know this is from almost 6 years back, but this concept is interesting all the same. As a kid I hated Inuyasha (because I lived a period of my life hating anime) and couldn't understand Naruto; but I'd say nowadays I have a cordial view of both series.
These two characters make for a good crossover, just like Mario and Sonic.
5/10/2014 c5 Guest
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12/21/2013 c1 doglover
That was SO ADORABLE
That was SO ADORABLE
6/20/2011 c5 Jostanos
I..hee hee.. I can't.. Kukuku.. I can't stop laughing! XD
Dear kami "one in the same" is hilarious! XD
Sure there may be a couple grammer errors here and there but they may be overlooked. ^_^
Taiyoukai assassin please update soon so my laughter may continue! ^_^
Domo Arigato for writing such a wonderful funny story...
YOU PASS! ^_^
I..hee hee.. I can't.. Kukuku.. I can't stop laughing! XD
Dear kami "one in the same" is hilarious! XD
Sure there may be a couple grammer errors here and there but they may be overlooked. ^_^
Taiyoukai assassin please update soon so my laughter may continue! ^_^
Domo Arigato for writing such a wonderful funny story...
YOU PASS! ^_^
2/27/2011 c5 Kate
HAHA! Naruto and InuYasha get to torture Kakashi! xD Sooooo~ Kakashi is gonna train and raise them? Kinda? this is a really fun story! :) please keep it up! :) im excited to read more! :)
~Kate
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HAHA! Naruto and InuYasha get to torture Kakashi! xD Sooooo~ Kakashi is gonna train and raise them? Kinda? this is a really fun story! :) please keep it up! :) im excited to read more! :)
~Kate
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12/14/2010 c4 Tsukiyoko Natsume
Dude this is good and where the heck is the next chapter? Jk I do love this story though so far can't way for the next chap
Dude this is good and where the heck is the next chapter? Jk I do love this story though so far can't way for the next chap
8/12/2010 c4 eternalstarr
love this story! its very well! written please update the next chapter soon! I want to see if they find inuyasha and if they do please let him stay in the village and be part of team seven or something
love this story! its very well! written please update the next chapter soon! I want to see if they find inuyasha and if they do please let him stay in the village and be part of team seven or something
7/7/2010 c2 Kaila
here's a tip inuyasha wasn't born during the new moon but he was born during a lunar eclipse
here's a tip inuyasha wasn't born during the new moon but he was born during a lunar eclipse
6/6/2010 c4 1Trich
huhu
i like this idea even when the dialogues are a little bit flat or plain... but nonetheless your writing is good. maybe u could make the actions a little bit longer by describing more things=?
huhu
i like this idea even when the dialogues are a little bit flat or plain... but nonetheless your writing is good. maybe u could make the actions a little bit longer by describing more things=?
5/19/2010 c4 1The Faster Blade
Okay first, I need to give you the positive before I move in with complete and unequivocal honesty. Weasel-chan:
1) This is a very interesting idea, I've often pictured what it would be like if these two met.
2) You're not losing yourself by setting up anything complicated in the way of plot at this point.
Now with all due respect, love and weasel hugs, that is all I can truly say that I liked. This is where the constructive criticism begins.
1) In your descriptions, be a little less...rigid. You leap from past to future and back the present with no preamble. The reader can be very thrown off course by this.
2) Be a little more in character. Unless this is before Tsunade's insurrection as Hokage, there should be no reason why everyone gets all 'babysitter' when he leaves the village for a little bit. Not to mention, Inuyasha is-and this is for emphasis-a f-ing antagonistic. If anything, these two would spend a good time exchanging insults between one another before something (an outside threat) would force any kind of camraderie with one another.
3) Details are important. Not screwing them up is even more important.
4) Please, and I cannot stress this anymore...KNOW WHAT THE HELL YOU'RE DOING. I've dabbled in crossing universes before (see my multiverse fic Broken Lock) and I'm telling you. Unless you get a plot under way, there's gonna be some serious migraines waiting for by the next chapter.
Those are my two cents, and if you've anything more to ask, hit me up,
Luvs,
Nora-Inu (DGC)
Okay first, I need to give you the positive before I move in with complete and unequivocal honesty. Weasel-chan:
1) This is a very interesting idea, I've often pictured what it would be like if these two met.
2) You're not losing yourself by setting up anything complicated in the way of plot at this point.
Now with all due respect, love and weasel hugs, that is all I can truly say that I liked. This is where the constructive criticism begins.
1) In your descriptions, be a little less...rigid. You leap from past to future and back the present with no preamble. The reader can be very thrown off course by this.
2) Be a little more in character. Unless this is before Tsunade's insurrection as Hokage, there should be no reason why everyone gets all 'babysitter' when he leaves the village for a little bit. Not to mention, Inuyasha is-and this is for emphasis-a f-ing antagonistic. If anything, these two would spend a good time exchanging insults between one another before something (an outside threat) would force any kind of camraderie with one another.
3) Details are important. Not screwing them up is even more important.
4) Please, and I cannot stress this anymore...KNOW WHAT THE HELL YOU'RE DOING. I've dabbled in crossing universes before (see my multiverse fic Broken Lock) and I'm telling you. Unless you get a plot under way, there's gonna be some serious migraines waiting for by the next chapter.
Those are my two cents, and if you've anything more to ask, hit me up,
Luvs,
Nora-Inu (DGC)