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3/26/2014 c6 Guest
Amaaazing
2/12/2014 c6 6SmileysBasis2
Ho ho ho what do we have here?! Is JPandS updating? Why I never thought I'd see the day...

Anywho, I thought the beginning of the chapter was hilarious. Hormonal Usagi sure is a trip. My favorite part was definitely her bouncing Luna around like a doll with a bad English accent lol. I'll admit I've done that with my cat... but also her stealing the chocolate haha. Just great imagery and comedy.

I love Quatre's little infatuation with Makoto, it's so cute hehe. I also like the idea of him as a police chief, he's the kind of guy who would fly through those kinds of ranks. I can't wait to see what happens when we see them together :D

I really liked the whole scene with the Phantom and Rei. I'm curious to see what's going to happen with them there. Are they stuck, are they going to be coerced? Questions, questions, questions...

Again, so excited you updated. This gives me hope! Haha, love the story. Hope to see more soon!
1/25/2014 c6 varee
Hello.
First of all, thank you for another amazing chapter. Imagine my surprise when, only a day after submitting my review, another chapter appeared! Especially since it took about two years to upload...
Accept my apology for being unable to criticize, for, as a fellow artist - note it's NOT a writer - I am aware just how much a creative critic can spur to create even better work. The only thing I offer here would be a slight suggestion to include Heero in the plot, and possibly give a few hints as to who the Phantom is- his physical appearance or something - and, well, write a bit more. D
I was wondering whether you would allow me to create a fancomic based on this plot as well?
Cheers,
Varee
1/24/2014 c5 varee
Hello-
I seem to have stumbled and stayed with your story. Amazingly written, and much, much more interesting than the summary suggested.
I truly hope You'll update someday; it'd be such loss for this story to stay incomplete!
With hope,
Varee
PS. while you do seem not to accept suggestions, I agree with bermellon on the matter. Well, that's it. )
5/13/2013 c5 bermellon
ojalá actualices la historia que está muy buena... Y sería interesante leer el Rei x Trowa que propones todo un desafío jejeje no te olvides de está historia. Que me ha dado carcajadas
hopefully update the story is
great ... And it would be
interesting to read the Rei x Trowa
you propose a challenge lol is not
forget history. That has given me
laughter
5/13/2013 c3 bermellon
that story so fascinating. I'm
surprised you have few followers
and comments. I like Rei X Heero.
There will be a possibility rather
than Trowa?
5/13/2013 c2 bermellon
Interesante y muy gracioso! 3
11/27/2012 c5 4Aurora of Moonblade
I haven't been on here in quite a while, and I was very excited to see that you had posted again. I have a slight obsession with gundam wing/sailor moon crossover stories, and especially so if they are as well written as this story is.
I confess, I think I had a mini heart attack when I saw this story had been updated with a new chapter. I am simply blown away once again by your writing, and the story is still as amazing as I remember it to be! Your details are spot on, and rivals many published authors. I completely understand the pressures of personal life when it comes to updating, but I will eagerly await the next update no matter when it might occur.

Aurora
6/13/2012 c5 11NoLongerWriting-AbandonedAccou
YEY! You have no idea how happy I am to read this!

Sorry I've been gone so long. I no longer have access to a pc because I broke up with my cheating ex jerk off loser boyfriend, on my birthday cause he was still talking to the girl he, ugh, cheated on me with. So I smashed his laptop. I felt bad for a while, but I'm over it lol I'll save up and buy my own... eventually. Till then THE LIBRARY! (I swear every time I type that I think of Sokka! gotta love A:TLA!)

ANYWHO! This is another fabulous story! I envy your grammar skills!

The details you add help me visualize what I'm reading and I love that. I prefer being able to visualize as I read, the way the author sees it, as they write and you pull this off wonderfully!

The gang up of Quatre and Wufei at poor Ami, oddly enough made me giggly. Only because they are two of three guys I always love to see her interact with. The third being Duo.

I hope your going to update soon, your writing is amazing! Update them all too BTW!

Whenever I can get to the library I will do my best to get on and check for updates! I'll buy a laptop when I have to money :C I'm just so broke right now :C damn economy and crappy low paying jobs make it tough... but I felt so good smashing his laptop to peices. Ahh... c: I was the idiot that have him a third chance. Never should have given him the first.

See you next update!
5/25/2012 c5 14MinakoTrickster
Hello, dear. I popped on and found that you updated a peice I don't think I've ever seen before.

In the beginning I quickly got the gist that things were different, defintinly in Rei. She seemed more grouchy and out of touch. I was surprised by how she treated Minako at first, but then I got the sense that something else was possibly going on.

You further bring us into these Sirens, criminals that people have mistaken the girls to be. Thus creating a lot of problems when they all find out that their powers are manifesting strongly.

Though, I am curious about the glowing of Minako. If there isn't a side affect to it that we are jsut not aware of. I think it's totally awesome that the girls can conjure their pwoers and power weapons though, as seen in this latest chapter.

I like the pairings, but that is not my focus on reading a story. I don't always agree with them, but that's not my main focus. Just wanted to point that out. You know me. ;P

I am eager to see how Ami will keep the past life seperate as well as I have questions. Where is Usagi? What happened to where there was no Crystal Tokyo? Was there one? Or, because of Rei's earlier attitude, did something happen to break the group apart for a time.

I have so many questions, but I eagerly look forward to the events unfolding as I know you'll entertain and delight us readers with your amazing writing skills and build the plot and suspense for us.

Thank you for the awesome writing!
5/24/2012 c5 Oombala
Oh man, this section is coming back to life! I better get my ass in gear! This chapter was great though! I loved the development and I'm so excited to read more! It was well written and I loved how you did all the interactions. 3 looking forward to more!
5/24/2012 c5 9moonlightlunalaa
I totally forgot about this! xD

First off I love it! The tension between Ami and Wufei was great. After reading a couple of stories with them as a couple, I like way more then Rei and Wufei. I think they're more compatible both on a romantic level an on friendship/understanding level.

The rest with Rei, Minako, and Makoto were fantastic. I always love how detail you are in your writing! You're getting better on the action scenes. It was a little to short for me, but it's a good start. Rei's portion of the fight with *Spitfire (the one with the orange hair) reminded me of Sakuya from Touhou! O_o If don't know what Touhou (I dont blame you its niche) its a series of PC games (vertical shooting games) with a HUGE CAST of females characters and Sakuya (one of the popular ones) uses knives as her weapons and she could manipulate time. If Spitfire can manipulate time, then either it's sheer coincidence or you're secretly a fan of Touhou. XD

I LOVE YOU DESCRIBED REI, MINA, AND MAKO AT THE END. I pictures the visuals in head. . Actually when I read the description of The Phantom I instantly thought of Tuxedo Mask (it's weird Kamen for some reason lol). O.O I know its Fiore! He's come using using a tuxedo and a mask and hired the Sirens, to *shot*

On a serious note, I'm glad to see that you updated, since it's around Finals and nearing the end of school time, so it must have been hectic. Actually Im trying to do the same thing with my fic, so *hopefully* I can update it faster.

Btw I used Spitfire just in case you already name in the last chapter. xD

Hopefully you will update this sooner (and me as well). Can't read when you next the update.

PS: the next time you log into your DA account. Put me under a watch alert so I can do the same for you. O_o And that totally sounded weird. oTL
5/8/2012 c4 6angelicmayuka
So far this is a very interesting story, I like how you have incorporated all the characters so far. I really enjoyed Quatre as the chief of police and how he met Makoto, it's very real and adorable. Also it's so...very Trowa to already be immersed inside the evil syndicate and trusted. Very nice. To be honest, I can't bring myself to like Rei's character. She's rude, obnoxious, self-centered...wow. I can only hope for some crazy character development in the future. I am really excited to see the Rei/Trowa meeting and how that develops. I'm usually a staunch Rei/Heero fan but I'm willing to try something new and the idea of this story is intriguing. I'm hoping to see some more of Minako, her part has been sort of small so far and then maybe a bit more backbone in Ami. haha I'm being all picky but honestly I really love this so far, I can't wait for more.
3/13/2012 c4 4TirOrah
Holy crap! Rei's finally turned into Pyro and Makoto is...well, awesome. She talked to the forest, yay! Though I like her lightning-based powers, I've always felt that her connection to nature has been underestimated. I mean, she communicated with the trees in PGSM too! It's a little unfortunate that Minako can only glow, though. XD I'm sure she'll discover her real powers later on, eh?

Loved this so far. =D Nice and filled with action and humor. Nea-chan like. ^^

Ja ne!

PS: When the crisis in this story is over, please send Makoto to my house. We could use a relief from the electricity bill!
10/29/2010 c4 Oombala
Oh man, I'm so excited from reading this again! I'm so sorry for not getting anyof spatial intelligence out, but I've been revising too. The next chapter will come out this weekend, I'm sure of it! The Sirens intrigue me, and I'm super pumped for the rest of this. :)
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