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9/30/2014 c1 Guest
R ya gonna finish dis or nah.
2/19/2013 c1 animefangirl-isnotonfire
This is really good. I think you've definitely improved from the first one. Continue it! But you might want to give more background information in the next chapters.
10/11/2012 c1 Guest
more sex scenes dick
5/8/2010 c1 2Paradoxismminant
Yay, practice^^.

Notes: It's a "pall-bearer", not "Paul-bearer"...unless the dead person in question is named Paul, in which...I'll stop rambling now.

Sometimes it feels a little melodramatic (though it might be me...), but I can understand because well, you'd feel like crap. Maybe explain a little more about why exactly she feels so guilty?

But yeah, continue^^.

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