for In Between and After12/24/2024 c12 
4Aniralynn
I read and favorited this fic years ago, and came back to it today because something reminded me of it. I still love it years later.
4AniralynnI read and favorited this fic years ago, and came back to it today because something reminded me of it. I still love it years later.
1/4/2021 c12 2Because Banana
Hi :D Sorry to be so late, and sorry to review only your last chapter. I couldn’t stop reading your fiction until the endThank you again for all our great work and story :D It really felt like added scene to the movie in the first chapters, with very interesting and thoughtful additions! Your writing conveys a string sensibility and you managed to grasp the thoughts of V and Evey in a really captivating manner. Thank you so much. Your chapters were almost too short, I would have loved to read more ahaha ! Then your rewriting of the ending was quite smart and credible, thank you! Nice job x) Then I imagine writing the end of your story without the backup of the movie has surely felt difficult. You managed welli was maybe a bit disappointed that you did not took the time to develop it has much as the previous chapters. I would definitely loved to read more of their development and recovery, before it ended on a (quite cheesy but still interesting) lemon so quickly, but nothing’s perfect ;p Your final chapter was also very fitting, thank youWell, I’m a few years late but I really wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed reading your work
2Because BananaHi :D Sorry to be so late, and sorry to review only your last chapter. I couldn’t stop reading your fiction until the endThank you again for all our great work and story :D It really felt like added scene to the movie in the first chapters, with very interesting and thoughtful additions! Your writing conveys a string sensibility and you managed to grasp the thoughts of V and Evey in a really captivating manner. Thank you so much. Your chapters were almost too short, I would have loved to read more ahaha ! Then your rewriting of the ending was quite smart and credible, thank you! Nice job x) Then I imagine writing the end of your story without the backup of the movie has surely felt difficult. You managed welli was maybe a bit disappointed that you did not took the time to develop it has much as the previous chapters. I would definitely loved to read more of their development and recovery, before it ended on a (quite cheesy but still interesting) lemon so quickly, but nothing’s perfect ;p Your final chapter was also very fitting, thank youWell, I’m a few years late but I really wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed reading your work
9/15/2019 c12 2sileavatar
This was a beautiful alternate ending, one that many fans like myself desperately craved. Thank you so much for making it stay as true to the characters and plot as possible! A pleasure to read
2sileavatarThis was a beautiful alternate ending, one that many fans like myself desperately craved. Thank you so much for making it stay as true to the characters and plot as possible! A pleasure to read
11/20/2017 c3 Anono
Naw lovely setting and situation and plot :)
Would reccomend tweaking the dialogue a bit, you write speech with a correctness that people don’t have eg do not is usually spoken as don’t, be afraid of me is usually don’t be scared or it’s ok etc. I know V speaks less casually but you can contrast his vocabe against hers to make a real sense of who is speaking, rather than just using dialogue for plot development
Naw lovely setting and situation and plot :)
Would reccomend tweaking the dialogue a bit, you write speech with a correctness that people don’t have eg do not is usually spoken as don’t, be afraid of me is usually don’t be scared or it’s ok etc. I know V speaks less casually but you can contrast his vocabe against hers to make a real sense of who is speaking, rather than just using dialogue for plot development
3/10/2017 c12 C
Wow. This has been lovely, I enjoyed it very much, it was well written and never lingered too long on anything we already knew as readers. Lovely.
Wow. This has been lovely, I enjoyed it very much, it was well written and never lingered too long on anything we already knew as readers. Lovely.
5/29/2016 c12 Hall of Rune
There are tidy, happy endings, and then there is this - a poignant, profound moment that signifies the end of an era, and the birth of one risen from its ashes. Well done ~
There are tidy, happy endings, and then there is this - a poignant, profound moment that signifies the end of an era, and the birth of one risen from its ashes. Well done ~
5/28/2016 c3 Hall of Rune
I love the simplicity of the sentiments you write, made all the more touching in the gentle intimacy you've written between them.
I love the simplicity of the sentiments you write, made all the more touching in the gentle intimacy you've written between them.