
6/16/2010 c11 susaninha
OH MY GOD!
that's perfect... James will know that is harry in the next chapter?
please please yes^^
You really turn this story into a work of art..
update soon = )
OH MY GOD!
that's perfect... James will know that is harry in the next chapter?
please please yes^^
You really turn this story into a work of art..
update soon = )
6/16/2010 c11 WETBOY
GREAT CHAPTER!
WILL JAMES FIND OUT IT'S HARRY IN THE NEXT CHAPTER?
UPDATE SOON AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
GREAT CHAPTER!
WILL JAMES FIND OUT IT'S HARRY IN THE NEXT CHAPTER?
UPDATE SOON AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
6/16/2010 c11 simishu07
Now ,that there is a turn from original story should get interesting.
Just pointing out a mistake: Harry should not be able to tell about Riddle Manor since it is under Fidelius Charm and LV is secret keeper.I think only Secret Keeper can tell name and address of place but I could be wrong too ;).
Now ,that there is a turn from original story should get interesting.
Just pointing out a mistake: Harry should not be able to tell about Riddle Manor since it is under Fidelius Charm and LV is secret keeper.I think only Secret Keeper can tell name and address of place but I could be wrong too ;).
6/15/2010 c9
7AbaratFox
You know, I'm kind of disappointed that Harry goes 'good' in the end, this evil Harry is totally bad ass! And anyway, Dumbuldore's kind of a dick.

You know, I'm kind of disappointed that Harry goes 'good' in the end, this evil Harry is totally bad ass! And anyway, Dumbuldore's kind of a dick.
6/15/2010 c10
6kamuinoyume
I'm getting tired of reading all the repeated "James felt his heart sink", one time is enough.
You know that Nurmengard is in Germany right? Or did you relocate it in England for this AU?
Poor Harry, and poor Voldemort. I honestly hope he gets back his son.

I'm getting tired of reading all the repeated "James felt his heart sink", one time is enough.
You know that Nurmengard is in Germany right? Or did you relocate it in England for this AU?
Poor Harry, and poor Voldemort. I honestly hope he gets back his son.
6/15/2010 c9 kamuinoyume
I don't like this. I remember Voldemort being a little bit more reluctant to send his son out in the original fic. Again, as in your last fic, you forgot to mention that there were anty-apparition wards on the building, else I can't see why Harry couldn't have simply apparated out of there. Soooo, there were anty-apparition wards, but no anty-porkey wards? While the fact that the Hit wizards got Harry means a whole new development for the story, I'm not sure if I like it...well, I'll just have to read the next chapter.
I don't like this. I remember Voldemort being a little bit more reluctant to send his son out in the original fic. Again, as in your last fic, you forgot to mention that there were anty-apparition wards on the building, else I can't see why Harry couldn't have simply apparated out of there. Soooo, there were anty-apparition wards, but no anty-porkey wards? While the fact that the Hit wizards got Harry means a whole new development for the story, I'm not sure if I like it...well, I'll just have to read the next chapter.
6/15/2010 c8 kamuinoyume
Wow, I'm glad you've given Neville a much more important part in your story, I mean wow, it will be that much more interesting when the two chosen ones face off. Hmm, I have to say that I liked the whole "Sirius's plan" thing better in the original fic. But the rest of the chapter was awesome.
Wow, I'm glad you've given Neville a much more important part in your story, I mean wow, it will be that much more interesting when the two chosen ones face off. Hmm, I have to say that I liked the whole "Sirius's plan" thing better in the original fic. But the rest of the chapter was awesome.
6/15/2010 c10 CandyMountainRocs
woaw, deviating from the origional plot much?
i love it, keep it coming =)
woaw, deviating from the origional plot much?
i love it, keep it coming =)
6/15/2010 c10 Mel
*squeals* new stuff is happening! This is so cool! It's like reading a new story - I have no idea what is going to happen!
*squeals* new stuff is happening! This is so cool! It's like reading a new story - I have no idea what is going to happen!
6/14/2010 c10 proof
fantastic! can hardly wait to read more! thank you!
fantastic! can hardly wait to read more! thank you!